[YTP]Summer Fun Time!

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heres my newest YTP, note it has very little to do with summer, and also note that when i made this i was out of practice so its not my best work

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This will probably look like a comment from mr meanypants but

The intro was a bit lame, "because explosions are funny" made me laugh a bit since I expected a "wtf booooom", "so we can give it as a gift to our relatives in ass and ass and ass and ass an--appleloosa" was a little bit funny, the ytp had waay to must text things, I personally prefer when the clips are shorter, the part with pinkie's song was a bit boring, the twilight ass zoomin was a bit funny hah, the pinkie pie crazy music part was waaaaay too long, it should have been like 15 seconds.. max.

 

So to be honest I thought this was pretty boring :<

 

There is too much empty space in your ytp, stuff should happen all the time for it to be funny.

This is a really bad and short YTP I made (when I was waiting for LRP to come online in skype lol) two days ago, but if you go to 0:51 of the video you can see that I put stuff in there like every time he said something, that is what I mean I want in ytps for them to be funny.

 

 

again it sucks but I hope you understand what I mean, there can't bee too much time where nothing happens and yet it can't happen stuff for too long without changing clip

 

 

again I know it sucks (and I failed hard at the wtfboom) but go to 0:51 where he talks. If you put stuff like that more often in your ytp I bet it would have been twice as funny

 

 

 

 

Edited August 11, 2012 by Mr. Pillow

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(grr notification fail!) i was a bit out of practice when i made this, its been awhile since ive made these, im still getting back in the swing of things as it were