The Lost Brother

[Manic Wits 0]

1st Off I would just like to say I suck at grammar so just try to enjoy it

2nd I'm thinking of making a pro-log before doing anything else cause I don't know weather I will like it or not to actually start it

If you don't know there is a Fan Fiction of the Princess's Parents (King Cosmos and Queen Galaxia) they will be in this so tell me what you think and if you like it i will ill make a whole story of it (Discord, Celestia and, Luna will also be in this story)

 

this will also only be part one cause i want to see if its good enough still

 

and i get very busy i know it is short but i just want to know if its good enough

 

 

Pro-log part one

 

 

"King Cosmos, Queen Galaxia!! Discords coming we have to evacuate the castle and run away my Lord."

 

"NO no more of this running away... It's time to face him," King Cosmos looked at his queen and said, "Honey you should go there isn't much time i will end this war once and for all" The queen looked at his king and notice the sad face. She new he wasn't going to come back. The king hugged his queen and said "I will be back don't worry. You, me, and our two children will be happy together."

 

"Make that three... and it's colt" The king was surprise. He didn't know what to say, but then he thought maybe now one of my kids will be playing sports trow the football around and shoot hoops. He smiled he was about to kiss his queen when they heard a laugh coming out of no where.

 

"Muhahahaha oh look the Queen has a son. That's cute maybe after i kill you i can keep the filly and make him my son and make him just like me."

 

The king looked at his queen and said, "Go to our daughters and run." After the queen left he looked at Discord with a looked of anger and said, "NEVER I WILL END THIS NOW!!!' They fought hours none ending. As the King used his power with all his might Discord was barley sweating.

Edited August 21, 2012 by Manic Wits