private A Visitor

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Hank a mercenary in space fighting a war against the resistance. Everything is going well, he went to go and walk around the ship. Soon enough it got attacked and they started to extract the workers as one dropship had the team mates. All of the main members, count them and there is about 14 of them and only 12 fight. They are missing one, the one is called Hank, he is number one on the records proving he is good in combat and is really smart thinking things out. Hank watched the drop ship fly off as Hank walked to a dimmensional Portal. He turned it on and gave a sigh as he was about to enter until he got shot in the chest from one of the enemies. Hank holds his chest as he enters the portal and it closes behind him. There are two portal devices made, one is with the drop ship and the second is the one he just used.

 

It was a nice day in ponyville the sun is out all the ponies are doing their everyday things. That is until a flash of light and a pulse happens as a hooded figure appears laying on the ground holding his chest as he bleeds. He examines his location seeing ponies around him.

 

 

 

Mod Note: Fixed OOC Link for you.

Edited September 5, 2012 by Ice Storm

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Thomas remembered when space exploration ceased and space colonization started. But that was when he was a young boy.

He gazed up at the space elevator out of the window.

Thomas had never been to space... He didn't have the choice, that was his Commanders decision to make, not his...

He sighs as another drill is called and leaves for the daily boot camp drills to ensue.

 

Pinkie Was hopping up and down through the town, as she always did. The town usually bustling with chatter and activities.

As she rounded the corner a bright flash of light and a loud crackle whizzed through the air. Everypony stopped in their places. No one dared move... for the new figure that stood in front of them was like nothing they had ever seen.

Pinkie did as everyone else did, she stopped moving, talking, and her breathing slowed to shallow pants.

The figure looked around...

 

Pinkie had never seen a creature such as this... What kind of thing was this tall and walked on two legs? She stood there in awe and terror.

Edited September 2, 2012 by Rainbow Dashey

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Once the ship was cleared the leader walks in as a soldier runs up to him. "its not here sir." the leader sighs "he must have taken it with him make sure we can get that device back to our ship." they nod and started to load it to their ship.

The drop ship that had the 11 fighters sat there in a serious silence until one broke it. Her name is Carolina "where is Hank? I hope he didnt get captured." they nod as they worried about him

 

Hank glances at all at the ponies as he seemed in alot of pain "please someone get me to a doctor...." he takes a couple of steps as he still bleeds "please somebody.." He took some more steps as he fell to the ground and pulled tweezers getting the bullet out and sighs as he still holds the wound. now he needs to bandage it.

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The figure began to clean it's wound when it passed out.

The ponies took a step closer to the figure, and another, and another

Pinkie joined in...

"I think we need the nurse" exclaimed pinkie.

Just as she said that Rainbow Dash rounded the corner into the town square

"what's all the commo..." she said as she was interrupted by pinkie

"Dash! You need to fly and get the Doctor as fast as you can!" pinkie shouted

"but wh..."

"just do it!"

Rainbow Dash took off as fast as she could to retrieve the doctor.

 

The figure began to stir in the hospital bed...

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Hank groaned sitting up "wow im alive.." he looks at his bandages "who saved me?" he looks around wondering who is in the room. He groaned and sighed "why would someone do this.." He lays back down as Delta the green hologram, a fragment of the Alpha AI.

 

The Alpha is a clone of Hank just smaller and he is supposed to help power his abilities but thats what the fragments are for, the Alpha controls the fragments.

 

Delta sighs "Hank we are all glad you are alive."

Hank nods "i am too but i wonder who would do that, i owe them my life."

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Pinkie and Rainbow Dash were standing outside the ward with the nurse.

"so pinkie, what did i go and get the doctor for?" rainbow asked

"well you see..." pinkie inhaled "there was this big... thing... and it was hurt so it needed to be brought here."

she finished with a smile

"what do you mean... it?" she asked pinkie

"well, nopony knows... it's been asleep and nopony wants to go in there and find out what it is and where it came from."

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Once Hank felt good enough to walk he gout off the bed and opens his door and walks out the room wondering who he should think. He slowly walks using the wall as a support and abit of a guild to help him out. He soon arrives to where Pinkie and Rainbow Dash is and smiles weakly at them from under his hood. It was rather hard for hank to see as his left eye had a scar over it and he had no pupil it was pure white showing he cant see from that eye. "hello." he says "did you two save me?"

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Dash finally sees the figure and her jaw drops as she stares dumbfounded.

"Yes we did!" Pinkie said as she jumped up and down. "And Dash went and got the doctor to help you!" she said still smiling

The figure turns to Dash...

"Who me... I... Uh!" she stopped talking and stared once again.

"Oh don't be such a worry wart Dashie!" pinkie said nudging dash

Dash refused to reply

"well..." pinkie started to say something "...who and what are you?"

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He gave a smile "Thank you two for saving me, i owe you my life." he gave a bow. "oh my name is Hank, i came from Earth and to what i understand is that its in another dimmension." he sighs and gave them both a hug "i know everypony here is shocked in seeing me and i am too so lets start off as friends" he smiles "can you show me around?"

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"okey dokey lokey!" stated pinkie pie "i'd love to show you around" she began to bounce again

As the two make way for the exit pinkie turns around

"Dash you comin' ?" pinkie asked

"Uhmmm you two go ahead" she replied "i'll catch up later"

"okie dokie then!" she said and the two left the building to get a tour of ponyville.

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Hank smiles following Pinkie "is everypony here this nice?" he smiles humming a little song "so Pinkie why are you always so happy?" he looks around ponyville with her wondering if the ponies will approve of him staying here. "So Pinkie is there a place i can stay at when its night because as you can see i have no place to stay at."

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"most of the ponies here are really nice" she said smiling as she always did

"And ive always been this happy since i was a filly"

As they continue down the street pinkie pointed out important buildings and poeple. As they pass by ponies still continue with idle conversations about the new visitor in pony ville, but they weren't running in fear as they were earlier.

"A place to stay you say?" pinkie said. "well If i convince Mr. and Mrs. cake, you could stay with us!"

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He nods listening to her talk. "im glad none of the ponies are running from. And they are talking about me." He thinks "dont you have other friends that we can ask in case Mr. and Mrs. Cake says no." he remembers all the important places "Pinkie, let me tell you one thing, no one has been this nice to me before."

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"well if they say no" she paused for a moment "there are still my other friends that might let you stay for a while"

Pinkie continued talking with him.

"What do you mean no one has been this nice to you before?" pinkie asked "how could anybody want to be mean to you?"

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he gave a sigh "well if you got to see." he took his hood off showing his face. The first thing pinkie can see is his no pupil left eye. "this happened from one of the people i fought." he removed part of his cloak and lifted his shirt showing alot of scars. "A lot of people are mean to me." he sighs "well i am glad to be in a place just as nice as everything. So can i meet your friends or will we ask the Cakes first?"

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Pinkie breath was taken from her when she saw the scars

"oh no...." she said quietly "that's terrible... nobody should have that done to them"

As they continued on their way.

"we should meet the rest of the gang first come on this way!" she said enthusiastically as she began to bounce on her way through town.

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He nods "yea no one should have done that." he sighs "but i got some of them for saving my friends. im worried about them" he sighs and smiles putting his shirt down hiding the scars and putting his hood on and still follows her wondering who he will meet.

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Pinkie led Hank through ponyville until they came upon a grand tree near the edge of the town.

"This is where my friends Twilight and spike live" she said gesturing towards the tree with a door and windows in it.

She skipped up to the door and knocked

"Twilight! it's pinkie!" she said pounding on the door.

hoofsteps could be heard then the door creeked open revealing a purple pony, or should i say unicorn.

As Twilight opened the door farther she saw a tall hooded figure next to pinkie. She let out a shriek and closed the door.

"Twilight! This is hank... He is from a land called earth" she said through the door

"If he's from earth, why haven't i read anything on such a place?" she said

"Well... if you'd open the door we could explain this to you." pinkie encouraged

A moment passed and the door opened once again.

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Hank gave a sigh when Twilight shrieked and closed the door. He waits as Twilight opens the door "hello Twilight its nice to meet you." he gave a smile and a little bow "i can tell you things about Earth but you probably wont like what will be said." he still had his hood on

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Twilight gulps and opens the door completely and steps to the side to allow the two to enter.

"okay call me crazy... But why are you here?" said twilight as she shut the door behind them. "and how did you get here in the first place?" she stated as she began to look for books on earth.

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Hank smiles as he enters "well i got here from a dimmensional portal, i guess it was luck i got here, it was either going through the portal or dying." he sighs "thats how i got here, i have no idea why though." he watches her look for books. "i dont think you have books of Earth."

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"yeah i know i don't have books on earth... i just can't believe there are other dimensions!" she exclaimed, "this changes everything we know in science and history!"

Twilight was obviously excited to be apart of something so large.

Spike came down the stairs

"hey twilight have you... WOAH!" he shouted as he clambered back up the stairs.

"spike get down here!" twilight stated

"come on spikey!" pinkie chimed in.

"no."

"oh well... he's always a party pooper" pinkie said giggling.

 

"so..." twighlight said "... What is this 'earth' like?"

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He smiles "you seem really excited. I wonder who you will tell now? Are you going to tell someone who rules over the land?" He thinks "oh yea Earth... Its kind of like this but there are homeless people, people that are mean and beat up each other. People do alot of bad things such as..." He removes his hood showing his left eye "this is what happened at earth."

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Twilight gasps "That sounds terrible, has it always been like this?" she said " We have had only one major conflict, and that was over a thousand years ago" she stated...

"so is everypony on earth like you? relatively speaking..." she asked him. Now on her toes, completely enticed by the conversation.

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He thinks "yes it has." He sighs "im trying to stop them but we got attacked. Certain ponies are kind of like me. For example my friends and team mates. We always have major conflicts." He sighs as he sheaded a tear "i hope they are ok." He looks at them both "any other ponies i should meet?"