AppleTreeBrony 228 September 5, 2012 Share September 5, 2012 I finally wrote a Fan Fiction, It's short (So Far) and only has 3 written chapters. So I'm asking you KH, and MLP super fan's, What do you guys think? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48991/Kingdom-Key So how was it? I'm back whoope! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XrosOver 613 September 5, 2012 Share September 5, 2012 (edited) It is already epic considering it as a KH crossover! Im already happy someone took the idea! Keep going and improve as you go! Edit: well REALLY after reading it say you should space the events more and add more detail to said events and Axel turned Lea is now human (Axel is Lea's nobody) and there is the obvious sum of grammatical errors.. Edited September 5, 2012 by JustTooXrosTS The mind of the host will desperately try to create memories where none exist. Simple right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Writer 41 September 5, 2012 Share September 5, 2012 (edited) Nevermind, just forget it. Put some more effort into it and I'm sure you can make something great, but for right now... it's not really going to do much... Edited September 5, 2012 by Writer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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