Newly written song lyrics.

[Alex The Earth Pony 72]

Hey. here's the lyrics to a song that I've written not too long ago. I'm still kind of new to this so if you see anything wrong don't be afraid to point it out so I can fix it up.

 

And about the song, it is basically a trio between Pinkie Pie, Gilda, and Rainbow Dash. The lyrics are pretty self explanatory.

 

Anyways, here it is.

 

 

-Pinkie Pie-

 

[verse one]

Oh Gilda, don't hate me,

I tried my best to see a smile on your face.

All I wanted was you to like me, as a friend.

but it looks like things turned out for the worst.

No longer will you ever treat me that way again!

 

[chorus]

I've felt your painful words crash down towards me.

Cant you see I cannot breath.

I've felt the your hate surround me.

No longer will I be on my knees.

 

-Gilda-

 

[verse two]

Oh Pinkie, why can't you see,

You're not good enough for me,

Can't you tell, Our friendship, just was never meant to be.

Rainbow Dash, is the only friend I need.

 

[chorus]

You tried to make a friend of me.

Instead you made an enemy.

You ignorance drove me away.

For that I will no longer stay.

 

-Rainbow Dash-

 

[verse three]

My best friends,

Why must you fight all the time,

I just want you both to just get along.

I tried my hardest,

but everything is just so very wrong.

 

[ending]

(Repeat Pinkie Pie, and Gilda)

Edited September 16, 2012 by Alex The Earth Pony

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

This is really awesome! Gilda doesn't get enough fan songs, and this one flows really well. I really love how it goes through each of the characters and their thoughts on the happenings in that episode.

[Alex The Earth Pony 72]

This is really awesome! Gilda doesn't get enough fan songs, and this one flows really well. I really love how it goes through each of the characters and their thoughts on the happenings in that episode.

 

Thanks that means a lot to me :3

[Acoustic Cloud 2,202]

typo in the first chorus get rid of the 'the'

gilda's 2nd line change 'nor' to 'not'

 

on gilda's chorus 3rd line

change 'you' to 'your'

 

rainbow dash's 3rd line

change 'wan't' to 'want' (get rid of apostrophe)

4th line

change 'tired' to 'tried'

 

But great rhymes man! keep it up!

[Alex The Earth Pony 72]

typo in the first chorus get rid of the 'the'

gilda's 2nd line change 'nor' to 'not'

 

on gilda's chorus 3rd line

change 'you' to 'your'

 

rainbow dash's 3rd line

change 'wan't' to 'want' (get rid of apostrophe)

4th line

change 'tired' to 'tried'

 

But great rhymes man! keep it up!

 

thanks and fixed

Edited September 16, 2012 by Alex The Earth Pony

[Daylight 18]

The lyrics are great but you need the song for it or we won't know how to sing it.

The rythm and the melody is important too.You have to make those too.

[MLP Nick 8]

hmm i dont know why but i feel as if Pinkie Pie is being overly aggersive its not like her to be that mean lile this quate from your song

 

but it looks like things turned out for the worst.

No longer will you ever treat me that way again!

[Alex The Earth Pony 72]

hmm i dont know why but i feel as if Pinkie Pie is being overly aggersive its not like her to be that mean lile this quate from your song

 

but it looks like things turned out for the worst.

No longer will you ever treat me that way again!

 

The lyrics aren't supposed to be actually cannon to her actual personality to the show. It is saying that she has grown tired of being treated wrong, and that she will no longer allow others to bring her down, oh and remember S1 ep25.

 

The lyrics are great but you need the song for it or we won't know how to sing it.

The rythm and the melody is important too.You have to make those too.

 

Honestly the melody is how ever you read it. To be honest I sing at the equivalent of nails on a chalkboard. I can only sing good in my head

Edited September 16, 2012 by Alex The Earth Pony