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this is where i post my art. i probably wont post/update much but, eh what the heck. I'm mostly posting for critique/ tips and advice. also so i can help myself with confidence.post-8819-0-85211200-1349574733_thumb.jpg

 

i drew a blackjack, from Fallout Equestria: project horizons. she's unfinished. i'm not sure if i should finish this picture or not.

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Well, first tip, please make sure your art is done on plain white paper and not wrinkled. It makes it very strange for the viewer to view any images if it looks like it came out of a school binder and just scanned.

 

You can try scanning it like you have up there then digitally ink it in something like Paint Tool SAI or GIMP, they are both free and can easily enhance your art fairly well, nearly akin to Photoshop here.

 

As for your art in Constructive Criticism -

 

I don't see anything wrong with it at all, it's actually pretty good. Hair's nice and unique, nothings wrong with the facial expressions or how they are placed/drawn.

 

I haven't the slightest clue what those rectangles are near his chin, or the t-bar near his so that seems out of place until better realized here.

 

There is ALOT of open space on your canvas here which makes it very empty to look at, not exactly exciting to see nor does it make anyone feel like they'd go back to see an empty looking picture. Though in part it's somewhat expected since it is drawn on line paper sadly.

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Not bad, for the start. I like it. Keep up your work. (I've never played Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons, so I don't know who that is)

 

Also, can I have a bite of your hair? It looks REALLY delicious!

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Not bad, for the start. I like it. Keep up your work. (I've never played Fallout Equestria: Project Horizons, so I don't know who that is)

 

Also, can I have a bite of your hair? It looks REALLY delicious!

 

yes gordon freeman, you are worthy of a piece of my delicious mane. * hands a strip to you*

also, thanks for the tips person above mr. freeman.

 

I drew more stuff. and because i am a "master" at paint tool sai, i didn't crop it. if you want to save it, crop it your self. critique please.

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