The Tainted One 69 December 5, 2012 Share December 5, 2012 (edited) I've been trying to work on my fanfic, but i'm having a bit of trouble coming up with ideas. Here's my fic so far if anyone wants to read it and maybe give an idea or two. Bump for OP edit and hopefully putting an end to this cursed writers block that has been plaguing me for several weeks now. Edited December 5, 2012 by The Tainted One Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MLP Dazzleglow 56 December 5, 2012 Share December 5, 2012 read the first chapter, and let me start off by saying great job. I like how you used Mass Effect gaming and other items to make this. Now as to your request, my idea's are as follows: have a team go down to the planet have them look around have them meet the ponies (or not) have them lose contact to 'Grace and Beauty' (thats just my preference) hope some of this helps you out. i added the page to my browsers favorites and cant wait to see what you come up with I am an American Soldier! I am a Worrier and a member of a TEAM! I serve the people of the United States and live the ARMY VALUES I will always place the mission FIRST! I will never accept DEFEAT! I will never QUIT! I am disciplined, physically and mentally tough, Trained and proficient in my warrior tasks and drills. I will always maintain my arms, my equipment and myself! I am an expert and a professional! I Stand ready to Deploy, Engage, and DESTROY the enemys of the United States of America in close combat! I Am a guardian of Freedom and the American Way of life! I AM AN AMERICAN SOLDIER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tainted One 69 December 5, 2012 Author Share December 5, 2012 read the first chapter, and let me start off by saying great job. I like how you used Mass Effect gaming and other items to make this. Now as to your request, my idea's are as follows: have a team go down to the planet have them look around have them meet the ponies (or not) have them lose contact to 'Grace and Beauty' (thats just my preference) hope some of this helps you out. i added the page to my browsers favorites and cant wait to see what you come up with I probably should have mentioned that I have like half of chapter one written and it's following the protagonist five years after the prologue. I have him on the ship to Pandora and I have the fight scene at the end of the chapter. I'm just lacking in ideas on how connect the dots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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