Another OC Sketch (Anatomy Practice

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

Did this in about five minutes because I really want to practice and get good at the basics of pony anatomy so I can actually be good at this! I want to be good at art, so I'm going to start taking it seriously. What do you think?

 

 

http://andrewclocksin.deviantart.com/art/Another-sketch-Pony-Anatomy-Practice-336782658

[Retro*Derpy 3,191]

I think it looks pretty good, just her tail is as big as her body . Not sure if intentional or not. That and she has some kinda bumpy curb at the end of her front left leg. But man for doing this in 5 minutes, that is pretty awesome.

Edited November 9, 2012 by Retro_Derpy

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Good, very nice work on the hindlegs. Now, prepare yourself for some tough love *cracks knuckles*

-the "chest" sticks out a bit too much

-her left upper thigh is too long

-the snout should be be angled a bit less upwards

-her left ear shouldn't be visible (unless her mane is supposed to be swept back)

-her neck is a bit too thin where it meets the head

-the ears should "sit" on top the head not be merged to it

 

What references do you use?

[Nothing&NoOne 695]

Hm...the neck looks a bit too thin, and the ears end in separate lines from the head, and the leg she's holding up looks a bit awkward and too long if she were to set it down.

 

Also, the mane looks a bit awkward from the front. It looks like it was glued to the back of her head.

Other then that it's good, I like how you did the eyes.

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

Good, very nice work on the hindlegs. Now, prepare yourself for some tough love *cracks knuckles*

-the "chest" sticks out a bit too much

-her left upper thigh is too long

-the snout should be be angled a bit less upwards

-her left ear shouldn't be visible (unless her mane is supposed to be swept back)

-her neck is a bit too thin where it meets the head

-the ears should "sit" on top the head not be merged to it

 

What references do you use?

 

Didn't use any reference for this one, it was just a really fast sketch. Thanks for the feedback though, I'll definitely use it.

 

Hm...the neck looks a bit too thin, and the ears end in separate lines from the head, and the leg she's holding up looks a bit awkward and too long if she were to set it down.

 

Also, the mane looks a bit awkward from the front. It looks like it was glued to the back of her head.

Other then that it's good, I like how you did the eyes.

 

Yeah, I didn't notice the thing about the mane due to the rushed nature of the drawing haha. But I agree with everything you pointed out, thanks for the tips!