Twilight Sparkle....wrote a book?

[moduz94 78]

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Have I ever mentioned that I HATE exams???? no??? because it's the only time I can think about drawings....during exams!!! oh sweet celestia sorry guys I wanted to submit lots of arts but in this period I have a popton of study to do....it's really embarassing but please don't mind me...just....just have a look at Twy readin' her own book XD

[Gone Airbourne 21,977]

http://fc07.devianta...z94-d5kzidq.jpg

 

Have I ever mentioned that I HATE exams???? no??? because it's the only time I can think about drawings....during exams!!! oh sweet celestia sorry guys I wanted to submit lots of arts but in this period I have a popton of study to do....it's really embarassing but please don't mind me...just....just have a look at Twy readin' her own book XD

 

I can't view the image from the place that I am at ... copy the url of the image and hit this tab here to show your image. Hope that this works!

 

[Motion Spark 7,807]

@, there you go, I hope you can see it now.

 

 

the thing that I can say that I liked the most on this artwork, is the coloring, I loved it

but it has WAY TOO MUCH mistakes, so I only gonna mention what did I like. I liked the tail and mane, it's flow beautifuly! and kinda the eyes as well, keep practicing mate! keep getting better, good luck

[Gone Airbourne 21,977]

@, there you go, I hope you can see it now.

 

 

the thing that I can say that I liked the most on this artwork, is the coloring, I loved it

but it has WAY TOO MUCH mistakes, so I only gonna mention what did I like. I liked the tail and mane, it's flow beautifuly! and kinda the eyes as well, keep practicing mate! keep getting better, good luck

 

Thanks man I couldn't view it since "deviantart" is blocked by filters and such. I also would have to agree with the coloring and the color of the background it beautiful! All in all man I just have to say @Moduz great job and keep at it! Listen to motion spark though he knows what he is talking about.

 

I enjoying seeing your work Moduz!

[moduz94 78]

guys, I just realized that I was focusing on the color and ONLY on the color this time around, so much that I totally forgot to adjust the drawing itself,, well....judging from your comments my purpose was fullfilled so it's a totall success!!!

 

well, off to do another one tonight!! I'll post it as soon as possible!!

 

 

I mean c'mon my drawings are usually like this, maybe I was truly on crack, look at those eyes!! yckes! XD

 

Edited November 13, 2012 by moduz94

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

Looking good,

Twilight:

-her sternum sticks out a bit too much. neck is a bit too short

-lose the outline around her cutiemark and/consider making the central sparkle irregular.

-there should be some more skin visible under her left eye

 

Rainbow:

-lower part of the mane needs to be adjusted to the position of the neck

-left front leg shoulld be a bit farther to the right

[moduz94 78]

Looking good,

Twilight:

-her sternum sticks out a bit too much. neck is a bit too short

-lose the outline around her cutiemark and/consider making the central sparkle irregular.

-there should be some more skin visible under her left eye

 

Rainbow:

-lower part of the mane needs to be adjusted to the position of the neck

-left front leg shoulld be a bit farther to the right

 

Respectively:

Twilight

-Did that on purpose (din't intend to go show-accurate)

-Completely agree

-Agree here too, already fixed that "glitch on the next drawing, I'm polishing it and I'll be posting it soon

 

Rainbow

-Agree

-why on earth? XD

 

thanks for the critics, that was exactly what I wanted from you guys

it's awesome to notice erros that others may see as well, got work to do!

Edited November 16, 2012 by moduz94