Quick water color painting thing of Crystal Rose's OC

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So like, a couple days ago I just started randomly drawing circles and from there I was like "wow lets quickly draw Crystal Rose's OC" and from there I was like "wow lets paint this in water color" and here I am now.

So like, if I ever use stupid guide circle things again I am going to do them a lot more lightly because I tried to erase the things and that didn't work out at all. I'm also seeing a proportion issue with the front leg and to me it feels like a generic pose and location. The kanji symbols also look pretty poorly drawn. As far as colors go, they are off from her original OC. They aren't way off, but they are off.

 

Anyway, even though I didn't spend too much time on this one any criticism would be great.

Edited December 26, 2012 by Lord Bababa

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This is nice, although i never use water colours because i find them to transparent and unimaginably hard to control.

 

another suggestion would be to use a softer pencil. Presonaly, while water colouring, the pencil lines don't look really good...

 

The snout shouldn't be so curved up and the foward leg is a little bit off.

 

The ear is a little bit small to my proportional view...

 

That's the critique i'm going to give for now hope to see more

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I really like this water-color painting. I haven't seen water-color in ages and this amazed me. This is a beautiful picture of the Flutters.

Note: Keep trying on the nose, it looks off.

Edited December 26, 2012 by Double D

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So like, a couple days ago I just started randomly drawing circles and from there I was like "wow lets quickly draw Crystal Rose's OC" and from there I was like "wow lets paint this in water color" and here I am now.

So like, if I ever use stupid guide circle things again I am going to do them a lot more lightly because I tried to erase the things and that didn't work out at all. I'm also seeing a proportion issue with the front leg and to me it feels like a generic pose and location. The kanji symbols also look pretty poorly drawn. As far as colors go, they are off from her original OC. They aren't way off, but they are off.

 

Anyway, even though I didn't spend too much time on this one any criticism would be great.

Awesome picture ,you should draw more stuff with watercolors,it seems you are good with it. Only criticism i can get to you is that there seems like to be no feathers in Fluttershys wings.