My pony fan art (most recent)

[Bonevelous 12]

Hello everypony; Mr. Bonevelous here.

 

I designed my own avatar from scratch for several different sites and the like. What do you guys think?

Edited December 31, 2012 by Bonevelous

[Drahgoon 152]

Hello and welcome to the forums! Pretty awesome for being made from scratch! However there are some odd proportions that can be fixed. The front leg is too thin and the hind leg is too thick. The nose/snout is a little far out. The eyes and ear could be a little bigger and more round. Her mane goes a little far out and it should cover the top part of her head. These are just some little things I see at the moment. It's still very good and I can tell that you put a lot of work into it. Keep at it!

[Bonevelous 12]

Thank you very much for the advice! I'm always willing to improve my works, and it really encourages me to hear such constructive critiquing! Again, thank you very much for your advice

[Blinding Light 81]

It's great! But as Drahgoon said, it does need some work like the wings are a bit small and everything else he said. Other than that it's fine! Keep it up!

[Feather Gem 967]

Well, if you would like to make it more like the ponies from the show, you could:

 

• Make the front legs a bit thicker
• Make the back legs a bit thinner
• Make bolder eyes (bigger)
• Make the tail more...poofy?  Thicker?  (or not.  It looks fine like that really)
• Make the ears bigger
• Make her snout shorter
• Make her thinner
• Make her wings bigger (I always make them too small as well)

 

I feel awful, having made a list.  Dx  But lists are easier to understand.

But I think its cute.  (to be honest, I laughed when I saw it anyway.  Sorry xD)

And I adore the pixel style of it.

 

I feel like this is a mean post.  But I'm going to post it anyway.

Edited December 31, 2012 by Feather Gem

[Bonevelous 12]

Well, if you would like to make it more like the ponies from the show, you could:

 

• Make the front legs a bit thicker
• Make the back legs a bit thinner
• Make bolder eyes (bigger)
• Make the tail more...poofy?  Thicker?  (or not.  It looks fine like that really)
• Make the ears bigger
• Make her snout shorter
• Make her thinner
• Make her wings bigger (I always make them too small as well)

 

I feel awful, having made a list.  Dx  But lists are easier to understand.

But I think its cute.  (to be honest, I laughed when I saw it anyway.  Sorry xD)

And I adore the pixel style of it.

 

I feel like this is a mean post.  But I'm going to post it anyway.

Aww, that's not a mean post And although I meant to make her appear in my own personal art style to some extent, I still believe you have good advice and will make her more show like, for better structure 

 

EDIT is this better?

 

 

I forgot to make some of the changes... I'll get to them eventually 

Edited January 1, 2013 by Bonevelous