Criticize my OC!

[UJn92kwC 108]

Hey everyone!

 

I haven't Posted this OC yet

 

and wanted to know what you guys/girls thought of it!

 

His name is BRONZE HUNT. He is a pegasus, I will think of a story later on, and I need a cutie Mark!

 

 

OF COARSE!

 

Anyways, criticize him!

[Critical Hit 69]

Okay, I'm going to try to be fair and objective.

1. Name: The name is a bit... off. Bronze Hunter I can understand, but Bronze Hunt makes him sound like he's the hunt itself, not that he's good at hunting FOR bronze, or whatever.

I can help you with names, I'm good at that, but you'd have to give me a tiny bit of info.

 

2. Color scheme: Base coat color is nice, few people use browns or tans.

I'm not a fan of true black manes, because seriously, can you name 3 canon ponies with black manes, or black anything, for that matter?

And the pink streaks are a bit too harsh, I'd soften them a few shades.

 

3. Cutie mark: Can't really help with that until you post a basic backstory.

Edited January 14, 2013 by Critical Hit

[crazitaco 596]

criticize? such a harsh word. i really hate doing that, i feel so bad afterwards ;~;

but.... er the color scheme is kinda.... pink/black brown red and blue..... they don't go so well together like the other guy said, black always looks out of context with the show... maybe just change the mane and tail color to something that would match his fur color, preferably warm colors like red/orange/yellows/browns

other than the color scheme he seems pretty respectable. i like the name, and i'd certainly like to see you give him a personality :3

Edited January 14, 2013 by crazitaco