pleasedontcomeback 209 February 6, 2013 Share February 6, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nothing&NoOne 695 February 6, 2013 Share February 6, 2013 Very..power-housed OC you got there. I'm a critic of Octavia's Hall, if you'd like an actual full on critique, let me know. Interesting character..though I'm confused of how she came to be. I didn't know the sun could make ponies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 7, 2013 Author Share February 7, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nothing&NoOne 695 February 7, 2013 Share February 7, 2013 Okie dokie, here's my critique then. I won't say anything about the character herself, I'm just here for the actual art. (Still very..power-housed though ) First off, it seems like you're pretty new with drawing ponies; so I'd start off with drawing circles as bases and going from there, or going over bases/trying drawing tutorials. The proportions are a bit off, but it takes getting used to. I'll start with the side view of the normal one; The ear and forhead are too small, and the nose/muzzle is too big. The neck is a bit wobbly and seems a bit too large, as well as the stomach area. The leg that's lifted up looks very awkward. It's too thin where it attatches to the body, and also looks like the leg is longer than the others. The near front leg is alright, but it looks like it's angled forward too much. The back legs are pretty good, they just need a bit of tuning; fix the lines up a bit, and either make them the same length as the front legs or vice versa; it doesn't look like she's standing on the ground. Evil one; Pretty much the same as far as the head goes, and the front legs; the back legs need a bit of fixing, they look very linear and wide. Also, is the red over her eye a tattoo/marking or a scar? Define it a bit, just so people know. Now the front views: Normal; Again, I'd start off with circles. They'll make your life easier The head looks oddly shapen, and the eyes aren't the same size. How the legs are is ok, but I'd make them a bit longer; she seems smaller. I'd also add back legs; it seems like she's just a front half floating around. Evil; Also pretty much the same as the normal view. The tail should be hidden a bit more by the body though, as it'd be directly behind her originally. The positives; Keep at it! I'd love to see her as a developed picture; as power-housed as she is, I like the idea of the "evil" side. My OC has an evil side also, and it's pretty fun to play around with. I'd also love to see a bit more detail with her to make her look fiery. :3 Nice pony though, she's interesting. Haven't seen one like her before Hopefully this helped and wasn't too harsh.. I'm just here to help Is there anything else I can help with? If not, keep practicing. You got this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 7, 2013 Author Share February 7, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936 February 7, 2013 Share February 7, 2013 No offence but you will get a lot of people criticizing your character, she seems very over powered and doesn't have a back story either :/ To be honest I don't like it at all... 'Can grow wings/horn at any time' Really!? She likes burning and killing... and oh gawd the colour schemes D: There are so many things wrong with your character, what next? Moves to Ponyville to live with Twilight? Sorry I am being so mean right now ;-; My OC's Viola Soulstrings Solar Ray Miles Check out my FIMFiction account ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 12, 2013 Author Share February 12, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junebug 5 February 12, 2013 Share February 12, 2013 (edited) I'm going to post my honest opinion about this. First word that pops into my head, Op. Your character is very overpowered and seems to only have one weakness (which I'll get to in a minute). She also has "no friends" and no family, which would probably cause extreme depression. I know if I had no friends or family, I would be in a mental hospital. Now, her weakness. With a weakness like that, your pony would be dead the minute she was created. I can tell you that there were at least ten fires put out in the last minute around the world. Can grow wings and horn at any time? I don't have much to say. I find "evil forms" are way overused and can be classified as a sort of mary-sueish/gary-sueish quality. That's all I have. The art is good, but like Princess Nightingale said, use the circles. Keep going! ^-^ Edited February 12, 2013 by Junebug Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 12, 2013 Author Share February 12, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junebug 5 February 12, 2013 Share February 12, 2013 (edited) OK. Like i said with vinyl scratch filly, please start with good comments first. ALRIGHT. Enough with the op, please. I know she's overpowered, i meant for her to be like that. Eventually my OC Equestria world had to have an industructable queen of fire. She has no friends because nopony dares getting near her. I mean, come on. If you saw a fire human, would you wanna go near it? Plus, she has family. The sun is her whole family. And her weakness: I meant in Firetopea, which is where her castle is. Sorry if I didnt explain that well. She's basically immortal, because nopony in Firetopea dares to put out their queen. In other places, like ponyville, same thing. Nopony wants to put her out. They're scared that she'll haunt them. Besides, shes extremely nice. Nopony would want to put out a nice pony, right? That was offendive when you talked about her wing/horn power. Her evil form, she barely uses. None of her subjects make her mad, exept Steve, which is her ex-boyfriend. He isnt a subject anyways. Thanks for the art comment, but I suggest saying things about the way I drew her, not the actual OOC. I will keep going and knowing nopony will like my OOCs, because they'll always talk about how overpowered they are and not bout how I drew it or who he/she is. Thanks, I will draw more. I don't understand what you mean by putting good comments first. I'd rather leave happy then leave sad. And I don't know how the fact that I had no comment on her wings and horn was offensive. Anyway, G'day. Edited February 12, 2013 by Junebug Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Circadian 1,273 February 12, 2013 Share February 12, 2013 (edited) I didn't know the sun could make ponies. Yeah about that... look this is really awkward for me. I never thought I'd be the one to have to give you this talk. Ferris Bueller is best pony. Edited February 12, 2013 by Circadian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pleasedontcomeback 209 February 13, 2013 Author Share February 13, 2013 (edited) TY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTSTY STOP LOOKING AT MY POSTS Edited July 19, 2018 by PonyLover123 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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