My newest (and best so far) OC, Blitz

[Blitz 127]

Ok so my other OC/ponysona thing got changed around a lot and wasn't all that great so I decided to make another one and I think it's way better. Her name's Blitz and her talent has to do with lightning (causing it, using thunder clouds, ect.) so I tried to make her mane silver... But I'm not really sure it actually looks silver...

P.S. sorry I made this on a laptop without a mouse so some of the lines 'n stuff are off.

Edited February 26, 2013 by Purplepower

[Zygen 6,066]

Looks pretty good to me actually! . Pretty nice mane color, I feel like maybe the coat could use some slight color adjustment maybe, but I'm not totally sure.

 

Also whats the cutie mark? I can't tell really . Looks like a vortex or something.

[Blitz 127]

Looks pretty good to me actually! . Pretty nice mane color, I feel like maybe the coat could use some slight color adjustment maybe, but I'm not totally sure.

 

Also whats the cutie mark? I can't tell really . Looks like a vortex or something.

The cutie mark is supposed to be a lightning bolt in the middle of a galaxy/portal/thingy.... I wasn't exactly sure how to draw it well

[Mightymags 1,053]

Looks awesome! I feel so uncreative...my idea for an OC has gotten nowhere...

 

I can sympathize with the touch pad drawings since I lost my mouse for my computer.  I really like the colors you chose to go with her talent, they compliment each other nicely. 

[Zygen 6,066]

The cutie mark is supposed to be a lightning bolt in the middle of a galaxy/portal/thingy.... I wasn't exactly sure how to draw it well

Oh ok I see it now, maybe you should just make the color difference between the bolt of lighting and the portal larger, so its easier to tell the difference between the two and then it'll be easier to see.

 

Its drawn pretty well, it just kinda blends together a bit. Just a suggestion though .