~Scootaloo 440 March 14, 2013 Share March 14, 2013 (edited) Would anyone be willing to read my Fan Fiction (link) and tell me their thoughts on it? People already [thankfully] helping.. Iron Wing has helped me out when she could however she lives over in Germany and the time difference makes it hard. However I do appreciate what she already does. TheSteampunkNinja (TSN) - he is currently busy however will help out later. __________________________ If anyone would like to read and/or help me edit post here and I'll PM you with "Part One". Edited March 14, 2013 by ~Scootaloo By Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldAccount13 10 March 17, 2013 Share March 17, 2013 Bro. Grammar Nazi extraordinaire here. I'd love to help you out with some editing here and there. Not sure if anyone got to you before me, but if the position is still open I'm down for some proofreading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Scootaloo 440 March 17, 2013 Author Share March 17, 2013 Bro. Grammar Nazi extraordinaire here. I'd love to help you out with some editing here and there. Not sure if anyone got to you before me, but if the position is still open I'm down for some proofreading Well I already got my first part of my WIP submitted and accepted (yay!) however I'd like someone to read it over and give some feedback. So I can get a better idea of where I want to take the story next. Here is the story (part one of it anyway): on FIM Fiction or the actual word document (it has some comments that a person who helped me edit put in (note: the comments feature will only work in 2007 and up I think)) here. By Kyoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldAccount13 10 March 17, 2013 Share March 17, 2013 (edited) On 2013-03-17 at 6:25 PM, ~Scootaloo said: Well I already got my first part of my WIP submitted and accepted (yay!) however I'd like someone to read it over and give some feedback. So I can get a better idea of where I want to take the story next. Here is the story (part one of it anyway): on FIM Fiction or the actual word document (it has some comments that a person who helped me edit put in (note: the comments feature will only work in 2007 and up I think)) here. Okeedoke. I'll take a look at it when I get back to the dorm tonight, and I'll be sure to give you some honest feedback Edited April 19, 2024 by SparityShipper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zygen 6,066 March 17, 2013 Share March 17, 2013 Well idk. I'm only a 15 year old in high school, so i'm not sure how amazing I am at profreading to be honest. And all the actual overall story critique I could give would be pretty meh seeing as I'm not really experienced with writing fics myself, I've read some but eh. I've read the part you posted on your other thread, and it looks good so far in my opinion, if you want i'll read the rest of it if you want, but I feel like I won't really end up offering any actual critique, so it may just be a waste . Regardless good luck . Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig! My Oc's, Ponysona, Bella Vocal Covers Blog, MLP Covers Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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