visual art Shooting Star (human form of OC)

[Sensuna 138]

Ok this took me really long because I was hesitating whole the time
Hope ya like it
and please leave some feedback

As usual I made it with paint tool SAI
(background with photoshop)
And I only used a mouse
 

Enlarge is win

Edited April 7, 2013 by Sensuna

[TomokoKuroki 1,707]

I like it, and it is very cute, moe, etc. You did some nice things with the background and the butterflies. But it would of been nice to see some of the detail and focus put more into the character. The butterflies stand out more than what the main focus of your image. The background should help pop out, or compliment the character in some way (in my veiw) but here it tries to steal the thunder.

 

But it is still nice, keep up the good work!

[Sensuna 138]

I like it, and it is very cute, moe, etc. You did some nice things with the background and the butterflies. But it would of been nice to see some of the detail and focus put more into the character. The butterflies stand out more than what the main focus of your image. The background should help pop out, or compliment the character in some way (in my veiw) but here it tries to steal the thunder.

 

But it is still nice, keep up the good work!

Thanks for the criticism

And you may be right...

What do you prupose I should've done to the character to make here "pop out" more?

[TomokoKuroki 1,707]

Thanks for the criticism

And you may be right...

What do you prupose I should've done to the character to make here "pop out" more?

 

Well it all depends on your style. For me I would of added more shading on the character, adding more detail to her while softening up the background. Blurring the effects and the butterflies a bit I suppose. The black/blue is such a contrast that it catches my eye a bit more than the character.  And the trails I feel are too strong, the character doesn't seem to look like it has any kind of a related power to them, and they just seem they are there to look pretty, but they steal the imag's thunder a bit for me I guess.

 

I am not sure, it is your image so you must do what you will within your comfort level/style. But you can't grow without making errors, so it isn't that this is a bad thing. ^.~

[Sensuna 138]

Well it all depends on your style. For me I would of added more shading on the character, adding more detail to her while softening up the background. Blurring the effects and the butterflies a bit I suppose. The black/blue is such a contrast that it catches my eye a bit more than the character.  And the trails I feel are too strong, the character doesn't seem to look like it has any kind of a related power to them, and they just seem they are there to look pretty, but they steal the imag's thunder a bit for me I guess.

 

I am not sure, it is your image so you must do what you will within your comfort level/style. But you can't grow without making errors, so it isn't that this is a bad thing. ^.~

I'm just happy you could give me some tips for the next time!

so thanks!

 

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