Neon Fire - My Ponysona!

[Neon Fire 473]

Here's two new pictures I drew of Neon Fire.  The first one has a whole description and everything for her, second is another recent pic I drew.

 

http://artaxia.deviantart.com/art/Neon-Fire-368881813?q=gallery%3Aartaxia&qo=2

 

 

http://artaxia.deviantart.com/art/Shy-369773835?q=gallery%3Aartaxia&qo=1

 

[Friendship_Cannon 1,677]

Sweet (I like the first one better, though, just from the expression xD).

Not much more to say, proportions are right and everything, beautiful OC. I usually draw the wings a bit bigger, but that´s just my thing somehow (and on the shy pic they look just a bit angular, but I think this is purpose, and it fits as shyness).

Anyways, good work, keep it up!

[nooneimportantwashere 705]

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Edited February 10, 2022 by nooneimportantwashere

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

I love the coloring. Most OC's have terrible color schematics! It's pretty good! Do you want some in depth critiques, or just a well deserved compliment?

[Neon Fire 473]

I love the coloring. Most OC's have terrible color schematics! It's pretty good! Do you want some in depth critiques, or just a well deserved compliment?

 

Anyone can do whatever they think is best.  If there's something wrong, go ahead and point it out so I can improve on it!  And thanks everyone for your posts! =D

[Kitty Cat Moonshire 629]

Anyone can do whatever they think is best.  If there's something wrong, go ahead and point it out so I can improve on it!  And thanks everyone for your posts! =D

Just know that I'm not trying to pick on you here, I'm just rather perceptive from doing art myself xD

The eye is too small, and at an odd angle. The ear is too long, thin, and blocky. The nose/mouth is a little off, but it's alright. The chest puffs out way to high, and slims where it should be puffed. The hooves are too thin at the base, and the rear hooves, both front and back are a tad too short. The top of the legs are connected a tad to high up on the body. The rear needs to be a bit more round. The wings are at an interesting angle (Although it may be in the show, I don't know ), and a tiny bit to small.

Sounds bad, but these are all minor things that are just slightly off. 

Dammit, now I feel like an asshole. :c

[Neon Fire 473]

Just know that I'm not trying to pick on you here, I'm just rather perceptive from doing art myself xD

The eye is too small, and at an odd angle. The ear is too long, thin, and blocky. The nose/mouth is a little off, but it's alright. The chest puffs out way to high, and slims where it should be puffed. The hooves are too thin at the base, and the rear hooves, both front and back are a tad too short. The top of the legs are connected a tad to high up on the body. The rear needs to be a bit more round. The wings are at an interesting angle (Although it may be in the show, I don't know ), and a tiny bit to small.

Sounds bad, but these are all minor things that are just slightly off. 

Dammit, now I feel like an asshole. :c

 

It's fine.   I'll remember next time I draw another picture of her.  It's always good to know what's off so I can improve on it.  So thanks.