Short Fluttershy Piano Theme

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

Lately I've felt a lot more of a connection to Fluttershy. I realized I share very many of her traits. So, today I sat down and composed a very short theme for her. It's kind of sad, but that's how I wanted it. I hope you enjoy it! Lemme know if you like it. God bless!

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yo8gFSJPp8

 

[Zygen 6,066]

Well I think its a pretty nice song overall.

However I do think it could use a bit more differing parts, its sorta the same melody for the most part throughout, I know its a shorter theme, but I still think maybe it could use a little extra variation in the melody.

 

Also as a personal taste, I just feel like it could've been a little faster, and maybe a little less slowing down on the ritardando's 

 

And thats about it, i'm not really skilled in making music per say, I just play trumpet so I have some music knowledge, so its up to you really.

 

Good job though, also maybe you should think about posting this to Pony.FM? always worth a shot maybe, although you may wanna incress the length a bit add some more parts.

 

Anyways, good luck regardless. God bless you to .

Edited May 6, 2013 by Zygen

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

Well I think its a pretty nice song overall.

However I do think it could use a bit more differing parts, its sorta the same melody for the most part throughout, I know its a shorter theme, but I still think maybe it could use a little extra variation in the melody.

 

Also as a personal taste, I just feel like it could've been a little faster, and maybe a little less slowing down on the ritardando's 

 

And thats about it, i'm not really skilled in making music per say, I just play trumpet so I have some music knowledge, so its up to you really.

 

Good job though, also maybe you should think about posting this to Pony.FM? always worth a shot maybe, although you may wanna incress the length a bit add some more parts.

 

Anyways, good luck regardless. God bless you to .

 

 

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that it's pretty simple throughout the song and the melody does repeat itself, but I sort of intended it that way. Your advice is definitely appreciated, though, and if I make a longer version I'll definitely do that.

 

I am using Pony.FM, but I think I'll only post full-length songs there. This was more of a small thing for my subscribers to enjoy while I'm saving up for Fl Studio.

Edited May 6, 2013 by Crystal Slave