Poor Derpy

[dedacct6 2,591]

 

Well of coarse i drew Derpy, shes awesome! 

i don't mind if you criticize its much needed if im going to progress as an artist  Enjoy, (i worked hard on this)

 

i will make a background soon its not exactly finished....

Edited May 9, 2013 by Pelate077

[Staticthor Draconus 959]

*starts making muffins rain from the sky*

 

SUCH AN INJUSTICE SHALL NOT GO UNNOTICED

 

FREE MUFFINS FOR ALL, ESPECIALLY DITZY DOO

[Tia Is Best Pony 310]

:'( please please draw derpy some muffins!! please man, the sadness the hnnngggsss i cant hold them im not gonna make it! DERPY I WILL FIND YOU MOOFINS!!!

[Mareinthemoon 348]

I figured derpy would have bad luck like this so for this type of situation I have the patented emergency muffin!!! This one is of the chocolate chip variation..

[letterone 1,204]

Pros:

-It's quite awesome in the shading department. Far better than what I can do.

-The perspective ain't bad. I like how it's angled.

Cons:

-Lines are a bit wonky. A lot of them are very shaky, and the ones for the table next to Derpy are lopsided, They make the table look like it's about to fall apart.

-Derpy's anatomy is way off. I'd suggest using a base, like shown here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/01/pony-drawing-guides.html

-Pinkie Pie there. Is she behind the table thing? Because if so, it doesn't make any sense, as the table is right against the wall. :s

 

Well, good luck with getting better and stuff. You have promise, but it's not showing!

[dedacct6 2,591]

Pros:

-It's quite awesome in the shading department. Far better than what I can do.

-The perspective ain't bad. I like how it's angled.

Cons:

-Lines are a bit wonky. A lot of them are very shaky, and the ones for the table next to Derpy are lopsided, They make the table look like it's about to fall apart.

-Derpy's anatomy is way off. I'd suggest using a base, like shown here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/01/pony-drawing-guides.html

-Pinkie Pie there. Is she behind the table thing? Because if so, it doesn't make any sense, as the table is right against the wall. :s

 

Well, good luck with getting better and stuff. You have promise, but it's not showing!

yea, i rushed the floor i didnt have a ruler , and the table is not against the wall, it more of a counter, i didnt make much of a background. but thanks for the advice

Edited May 9, 2013 by Pelate077

[letterone 1,204]

yea, i rushed the floor i didnt have a ruler , and the table is not against the wall, it more of a counter, i didnt make much of a background. but thanks for the advice

Ah, that not much of a background looked kinda like a wall. XD

 

Looking through the rest of your stuff on here, I have to say, you're definitely pretty good. And your pony anatomy isn't half bad. You definitely have promise and HAVE been showing it! I mean, you could use some slight improvement in your anatomy, but you're pretty freakin' good!

[derpderpderpy 38]

That picture you drew of derpy is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G AMAZING!!! the sad thing is derpy got no muffins . 

I just have one con about this the pony caring the basket is tiny 

[dedacct6 2,591]

That picture you drew of derpy is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G AMAZING!!! the sad thing is derpy got no muffins . 

I just have one con about this the pony caring the basket is tiny 

well, she was sopposed to be in the background but, it didnt work very well i edited it but i havnt got it up, i added a background etc, etc, IIIII

Edited May 10, 2013 by Pelate077