Older Snowdrop Drawing

[SparkBrony 379]

Here she is: Snowdrop as an older mare! As one of my favorite characters of all time, I felt I had to draw her. Sorry for no color :/

 

 

 

 

 

 

Feedback & comments please! I really wanna know what you guys think of it

 

Thanks and brohoof /)

 

More zoomed in version with less words

 

 

 

 

 

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Check out my drawing of Chrome Pony too!: http://mlpforums.com/topic/61410-my-drawing-of-chrome-pony/

Edited May 24, 2013 by SparkBrony

[TomokoKuroki 1,707]

It's nice. I like it, but there are a few issues I'd like to point out..

 

The head is a bit blocky. It looks almost like a male version of Celestia's head. So maybe making the mouth area smaller, or making the arch from her nose to her forehead a but more "feminine"? I would think making it not as high of a curve may add a more feminine look. And the section of her mane atop her head looks a little flat, rather than sitting on top of her head. If you add some gravity, and make it curl down a little bit; it might look nicer.

 

Other than that, I suggest you work on the anatomy. I assume you don't use a skeleton, or you are new with using them. If not, then I would definitely suggest using skeletons. They make an excellent map to show how you want your pony to come out, and what size to use for the limbs relative to the size of the torso. 

 

I am not trying to insult, or say it is a bad drawing, it is actually a great point to start with! I just wanted to get some of the major things notified so you can improve upon them for the next time. Keep up the good work!

Edited May 24, 2013 by Hayze