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Ugh, for some reason when I start a new topic it gives me this crappy little square to text in and nothing else... I don't get the full editor so just give me a second to edit this post here...

 

Okay! here we go! I'm looking for some critique on this digital painting I started. I basically have like, half the line art done so it's no where near completion but I would like some suggestions on it before I go too far and can't change anything at all.

 

WARNING: IT'S A LARGE FILE

 

 

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Well anatomy wise, you're in the mostly in green except that we shouldn't see his right buttcheek from that angle (possibly make the wing a bit bigger and get rid of that one hairless bit of tail).

Biggest  problem for me atm is that he's not terribly memorable, maybe add some gimmick accessory?


 

 

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