My (suckish) artwork.

[Honeypot Dreams 5]

Hi everypony, I was wondering if you could help me and give me some critique on my art. I apologise for the bad quality, as I lack a good (moveable) camera and I lack a scanner.

I based this piece off of this:

http://killryde.deviantart.com/art/Adorkable-Bookworm-377243728

 

This is of my OC, Honeypot Dreams.

 

So, thanks!

[Thunder Rocker 7]

still a better drawing than mine. lol. but seriously, its pretty good. sizing and proportions seem a little off to me, and i dont exactly like the pose, but it is better than mine. i finally decided to see if i could get someone else to draw it for me. i suck at any form of art.

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

It's not that bad, though the proportions could use a little work.  Just keep practicing and soon you'll be able to just draw them out of memory.  

[not 72]

 Very nice drawing, definitely better than anything I could do in a million years. As others have mentioned, the main problem is the proportions, and that's one of the hardest things about drawing, at least according to some friends of mine. Anyway, you ahve real talent. Keep drawing and you should be great at it in no time!

[Nobody Special 210]

It isn't tha bad. I just don't like the pose, but that is a personal prefrence. I like what you did with coloured pencils, and I would do the same I am just absolutly terrible at using them.

[Dopey Hooves 90]

Please don't call your drawing sucky. Dude this is amazing. But, it would have been better to use colored pencils because, the crayon seem to kind of make it too dark. The proportion needs to be fixed as well. Good job over all just a few mistakes.

This isn't my drawing, found it on the internet but, basically I draw like that.

So, be happy you can actually draw the form of a pony un-like me and many

others.

Edited June 17, 2013 by Dopey Hooves

[Mikestar 346]

He's not bad, I like his colors, but i think to really get a feel for him I would like to see his whole body. Maybe a side on shot, hear a bit of his history etc. I'm just a bit confused about the facial hair if that's what it is, coming from one side only. But yeah, my art needs improving too.

 

keep drawing, the more you practice it the better you get at it. To get the proportions, use basic shapes like circles and squares to plan out the design then erase them when you get the right look.

 

later.

 

Mikestar.