crossover I'm bored so I'm writing a fic

[sxp 404]

I was bored and decided to try writing a fanfic. Be warned though, this is my first attempt at writing and English isn't my native language. And it's My Immortal crossover. Don't know what My Immortal is? Theeeere we go. (I'm not responsible for any loss of sanity, brain damage and/or death)

 

But enough talk:

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BzTH2jSDplK-cWNLSnEwOXBUQ2s/edit?usp=sharing

I'd like some feedback on Tom's part, If it's any good or should I give up writing because it's hopeless.