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That looks adorable. Plus the marker outline looks pretty good~ From my experience, outlining with marker and coloring in with crayons or colored pencils look GREAT. 

 

 

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matching setups with my bff pathfinder

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Other then her butterflies look a lil big thats looks good almost a hnng effect that fluttershy blushing usyaly gives us

OMG somebody looked at my post almost immediately :) thanks I think the butterflies look a bit weird too... lol thanks again for your positive comment! :D Oh, and by the way, what pony should I draw next? (Mane 6)


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It looks good overall.

 

However the butterflies on her cutie mark are a bit big, and the outlines on the butterflies are kinda big to.

 

Also I think she needs a bit more of a rounder body, and its a bit skinny, right now its kinda flat and to hot dog shaped, but also skinny, I think maybe with a bit more added to make it less skinny it'll probably be a bit more naturally round.

 

Its not totally round, but it does have a bit of roundness to it. 

 

The body might be a little long, not sure on that one.

 

Also the hoof in the background in the front has an outline on the top, making it detached from her body. The bottom of it is also a little to round for a hoof, and the hoof overall is a bit skinny, especially in proportion to the others.

 

The back hoof might be a rounded a little bit to early, might need to be a bit more flat.

 

Her wings look a little big, and possibly a slight bit high on the body, or far back one, not a whole lot though.

 

ANYWAYS. Enough tearing your art apart its pretty good honestly, I just felt I needed to put in critique to help you catch it. So you can improve, critique is necessary for improving afterall :D, so don't take it the wrong way!


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Thanks to Gone Airbourne for the awesome sig!

My Oc's,

Ponysona, Bella

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Since you already did mu favorite in Rainbow dash I'll go for my next fav Twilight Sparkle alicorn or nonalucorn dont matter to me

I guess I will draw Twilight Sparkle as an alicorn then... Since I have never drawn a princess (Or alicorn) Thanks for helping me find out what I should draw! :D


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