open The Finale Expense(Romance/Action/Drama)

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder kissed Charcoal again. "That's what i think. If Caprisha walks in she can join in too. But now i just want to be with you." He said. He kissed Charcoal again. This time it was a long kiss. But after a while he broke it. He got up and walked to the bedroom. "Coming?"

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder kissed Charcoal again. "That's what i think. If Caprisha walks in she can join in too. But now i just want to be with you." He said. He kissed Charcoal again. This time it was a long kiss. But after a while he broke it. He got up and walked to the bedroom. "Coming?"

Charcoal smiled and got up. She followed Thunder to the bedroom with a little more sway in her hips than she usually has. As she got to the bedroom she closed the door, but left it a bit cracked. Then she walked over and layed down on the bed and waited for Thunder.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

After getting the protection on, to make less of a mess, thunder went up on the bed and started going his thing in between kissing and sweet-talking Charcoal. It had been too long since a night like this had happened. Thunder was happy it was finallt time.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

After getting the protection on, to make less of a mess, thunder went up on the bed and started going his thing in between kissing and sweet-talking Charcoal. It had been too long since a night like this had happened. Thunder was happy it was finallt time.

Charcoal started getting into it. She had missed doing this with the pony she loved more than anything. And maybe Caprisha could make the experience more enjoyable if she came in with them. Though her being pregnant and all might make that a bit of a problem.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

The next morning Thunder lied in bed, the blankets were folded around him and Charcoal. It was still dark outside when Thunder's alarm clock went off. This was the day that he would be sent away. Away from his Charcoal, Caprisha and Lightning. Away to a far country.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

The next morning Thunder lied in bed, the blankets were folded around him and Charcoal. It was still dark outside when Thunder's alarm clock went off. This was the day that he would be sent away. Away from his Charcoal, Caprisha and Lightning. Away to a far country.

Charcoal was still asleep beside Thunder. She was really worn out from the night before and was still tired. Since the alarm hadn't woken her she layed beside Thunder still in dream land. It was a rare occurrence that she had a dream, but she dreamed of getting her kidnapped filly back.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder looked at the sleeping mare next to him. He smiled and kissed her forehead. He dressed up in his uniform, grabbed his bag and left towards the train station. He walkedto the station and the closer he got, the more ponies in military uniforms he saw.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder looked at the sleeping mare next to him. He smiled and kissed her forehead. He dressed up in his uniform, grabbed his bag and left towards the train station. He walkedto the station and the closer he got, the more ponies in military uniforms he saw.

Caprisha had been at the station for a while waiting for Thunder to get there. She had seen a bunch of different ponies in uniform, and a few of them actually asked if she needed help since she was so pregnant. But unfortunately none of them were Thunder. She just continued to wait on the bench.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder looked around if he could see somepony he knew. Unfortunately he didn't see Caprisha. It was kind of odd that he couldn't see a bright orange pony in the middle of a giant horde of ponies, all dressed in a grayish green uniform. Caprisha was orange.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder looked around if he could see somepony he knew. Unfortunately he didn't see Caprisha. It was kind of odd that he couldn't see a bright orange pony in the middle of a giant horde of ponies, all dressed in a grayish green uniform. Caprisha was orange.

Caprisha looked around again and finally saw Thunder. She happily got up and walked over to him. "Hey handsome. Has anypony ever told you you look great in uniform?" Caprisha asked him as she walked up from behind. At least she got to see him one last time.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder smiled as he saw Caprisha. He walked up to her and hugged her. "No, not that i can recall at least." He said. "I'm happy you're here now, but where were you yesterday? Charcoal and i were missing you, well, sort of." He said with a big grin on his face, comtinuing to hug Caprishaz

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder smiled as he saw Caprisha. He walked up to her and hugged her. "No, not that i can recall at least." He said. "I'm happy you're here now, but where were you yesterday? Charcoal and i were missing you, well, sort of." He said with a big grin on his face, comtinuing to hug Caprishaz

Caprisha smiled and huged Thunder back. "I was in the living room listening to you two. I got to bed before you and woke up a while ago. I came down here afterwords and waited for you to come. It is as simple as that." Caprisha said with a smile on her face. 11

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Oh, errm. Yeah..." Thunder muttered. His cheeks became all kinds of red before adjusting to the normal "oh my god i am so ashamed right now" red. But he smiled anyway. "When i get back we could re-create the scene, if you like. But first give birth, i asked Charcoal to help you."

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"Oh, errm. Yeah..." Thunder muttered. His cheeks became all kinds of red before adjusting to the normal "oh my god i am so ashamed right now" red. But he smiled anyway. "When i get back we could re-create the scene, if you like. But first give birth, i asked Charcoal to help you."

"Well if she acts anything like she did before she will go into a state of depression for a while. She will eventually get back to normal, but she will still dearly miss you. I will as well, but I'm not going to act as dramatically as Charcoal will." Caprisha said with a frown.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@[member=charcoal embers

 

"Hey, the train is about to leave, i gotta hop on it." He said. Then he kissed Caprishaand trotted to the train.

 

Not much later the train left. Thunder managed a seat at the window and waved at Caprisha as the train was slowly speeding up.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@[member=charcoal embers

 

"Hey, the train is about to leave, i gotta hop on it." He said. Then he kissed Caprishaand trotted to the train.

 

Not much later the train left. Thunder managed a seat at the window and waved at Caprisha as the train was slowly speeding up.

Caprisha waved back as the train slowly left the station and took her stallion with it. Caprisha sighed and shed a small tear before turing around and heading home. No doubt Charcoal will need some comfort now that Thunder is gone and right now... she is all Charcoal had.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

((TIME WARP TIME))

 

About four months after Thunder had left aletter arrived at Charcoals house.

 

Dear C. Embers,

 

Sadly i have to inform you Captain Farts has been injured heavily. I request you come and look him up for he may be dying.

 

Regards,

Colonel Hoofington.

The letter read.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

((TIME WARP TIME))

 

About four months after Thunder had left aletter arrived at Charcoals house.

 

Dear C. Embers,

 

Sadly i have to inform you Captain Farts has been injured heavily. I request you come and look him up for he may be dying.

 

Regards,

Colonel Hoofington.

The letter read.

Caprisha dropped the letter in shock. Even though she had finally gotten her own place Caprisha had been caring for Charcoal. "Charcoal, pack your things. We are going on a trip." Caprisha said as she gathered her things and floated the letter for Charcoal to read.

 

After Charcoal read the letter she ran into her room and packed a few things she would need for the trip. Once they both finished they ran to the train station and got on the earliest train to get to Thunder.

 

((TELEPORTATION))

Both Charcoal and Caprisha ran from hospital to hospital to find Thunder. When they finally found the right one they were escorted to Thunders room and led inside.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder slowly opened his left eye, the other was packed in in bandages. His face was bloody and full of stitches. By the way his face looked one could only think horrors about what was underneath Thunders blanket, which was bloody as well. And stuff.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder slowly opened his left eye, the other was packed in in bandages. His face was bloody and full of stitches. By the way his face looked one could only think horrors about what was underneath Thunders blanket, which was bloody as well. And stuff.

Charcoal and Caprisha walked up to the bed and were shocked to see Thunder in such horrible shape. They bath sat down beside Thunder's bed. "Hey." Charcoal said. "We came to visit you." Caprisha said. They weren't exactly sure what to say to this. He was in really bad shape.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder slowly tuned his head towards Charcoal and Caprisha. And a painful moan left his thorn apart mouth. From the original, creamy yellowy coat Thunder had normally was nearly nothing left. The only place where you could really see it was underneath his ear, which missed a big chunk.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

Thunder slowly tuned his head towards Charcoal and Caprisha. And a painful moan left his thorn apart mouth. From the original, creamy yellowy coat Thunder had normally was nearly nothing left. The only place where you could really see it was underneath his ear, which missed a big chunk.

Wow. This is really bad. He looks almost nothing like he did before. Caprisha thought to herself. "You looks... not so bad. It could be worse." Caprisha said, trying to lighten up the mood.

 

Charcoal had begun crying. "Y-yeah... not so bad." Charcoal said with a sniffle.

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

A tear left Thunders eye. "How.... Do.... I..... Look?" He slowly asked, pain was hearable in every little bit of sound that left him. He was in great pain. By just being in that room you could feel it. Thunder couldn't feel his legs, or torso, or anything below his thorn apart neck.

[Charcoal Embers 169]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

A tear left Thunders eye. "How.... Do.... I..... Look?" He slowly asked, pain was hearable in every little bit of sound that left him. He was in great pain. By just being in that room you could feel it. Thunder couldn't feel his legs, or torso, or anything below his thorn apart neck.

"Pretty bad actually." Caprisha said bluntly. "I'm sorry to say, but a lot of your face seems to be missing. Or at least your fur, part of your ear, and a little of your jaw." Caprisha wasted no time saying it. "But, I actually have something that might make you feel better. Charcoal too."

[RainbowDashie 767]

@@Charcoal Embers

 

"W... Wh... What... Ca...prish." Thunder could tell it was Caprisha because he saw a giant orange spot moving around. His vision wasn't good, but it was better that nothing. He couldn't see with his tight eye, but he didn't know that it was packed in with bloody bamdages.