Crystal Slave - Rival: Redemption

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

Hey guys! Just finished another vocal song for my EP, this time featuring some tight raps from my friend Jonah! Also some more singing by me. Let me know what you think!

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQZYQYi_Cis

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I may not be much of a rap person but I think it's good. Sure, it's rather short but seems to be enough.

 

The lyrics is rather touching especially at the end. The first part was more about setting the context, wasn't it?

The interaction between the theme and the instrumentation isn't something I've encountered before and I'm left trying to make sense of it.

 

I'm no music expert or anything, I've only ever made one simple tune in all of my life so take it with a grain of salt.

[Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287]

I may not be much of a rap person but I think it's good. Sure, it's rather short but seems to be enough.

 

The lyrics is rather touching especially at the end. The first part was more about setting the context, wasn't it?

The interaction between the theme and the instrumentation isn't something I've encountered before and I'm left trying to make sense of it.

 

I'm no music expert or anything, I've only ever made one simple tune in all of my life so take it with a grain of salt.

 

Thank you very much! The lyrics were definitely one of the best parts of writing this song. Yes, the raps Jonah did were meant to establish Trixie's feelings and the latter part was meant to express Twilight's forgiveness and Trixie's redemption.

 

Thank you so much for the feedback!