My Raindrops quick sketch (Sharpied)

[PixelSketch 11]

My first pony sketch i sharpied it cause i thought it would look better but i messed up a few places but i hope everypony likes it

 

 

tips are welcome

 

please try not to critisize

 

complements

[NocturnalRainbow 248]

I don't get what you mean by "please give tips, but don't criticize" A lot of tips are going to sound like criticism because... it is criticism. People tell you whats wrong with it so you can get better and improve upon those things. Just saying

 

Anyway on to the drawing. I must admit it is quite good for a first time. The first time I drew ponies it looked like that, just a bit worse. I'm assuming it's an OC of yours called Raindrop but it really gives off a Derpy Hooves vibe. Not that that's a bad thing at all because it looks quite a lot like derpy which, in my opinion, makes it look better. From what you've shown of the wings they look good. Head seems pretty good, good job on the mane, the eyes might be a little rough but it's your first time so that's kind of to be expected (eyes be hard ) The chest seems a little disproportionate, or it might be the neck. Anyway I can't decide if the neck is too small or the chest to big but anyway it just looks kinda weird. 

 

Anyway great job for your first time and keep improving your artwork

[PixelSketch 11]

I don't get what you mean by "please give tips, but don't criticize" A lot of tips are going to sound like criticism because... it is criticism. People tell you whats wrong with it so you can get better and improve upon those things. Just saying

 

Anyway on to the drawing. I must admit it is quite good for a first time. The first time I drew ponies it looked like that, just a bit worse. I'm assuming it's an OC of yours called Raindrop but it really gives off a Derpy Hooves vibe. Not that that's a bad thing at all because it looks quite a lot like derpy which, in my opinion, makes it look better. From what you've shown of the wings they look good. Head seems pretty good, good job on the mane, the eyes might be a little rough but it's your first time so that's kind of to be expected (eyes be hard ) The chest seems a little disproportionate, or it might be the neck. Anyway I can't decide if the neck is too small or the chest to big but anyway it just looks kinda weird. 

 

Anyway great job for your first time and keep improving your artwork

i meant no bad comments like "this sucks" i would understand i kindof worded that wrong to i could have worded it better i was in a hurry

I don't get what you mean by "please give tips, but don't criticize" A lot of tips are going to sound like criticism because... it is criticism. People tell you whats wrong with it so you can get better and improve upon those things. Just saying

 

Anyway on to the drawing. I must admit it is quite good for a first time. The first time I drew ponies it looked like that, just a bit worse. I'm assuming it's an OC of yours called Raindrop but it really gives off a Derpy Hooves vibe. Not that that's a bad thing at all because it looks quite a lot like derpy which, in my opinion, makes it look better. From what you've shown of the wings they look good. Head seems pretty good, good job on the mane, the eyes might be a little rough but it's your first time so that's kind of to be expected (eyes be hard ) The chest seems a little disproportionate, or it might be the neck. Anyway I can't decide if the neck is too small or the chest to big but anyway it just looks kinda weird. 

 

Anyway great job for your first time and keep improving your artwork

And raindrops is actually a background pony that isnt seen in the show quite often and my OC is PixelSketch (me) and my OC has Light blue hair with red streaks and is orange

[NocturnalRainbow 248]

 

And raindrops is actually a background pony that isnt seen in the show quite often and my OC is PixelSketch (me) and my OC has Light blue hair with red streaks and is orange

 

Now I remember Raindrops! I think there is some fimfiction group with stories entirely about her I completely forgot about her existence XD