AJ, but...(sketch)

[Rayalicious 435]

Ok, so i drew this sketch of Applejack, and there is something wrong, it kind of looks like a creppy pasta at some point but i tried coloring and it was a really bad idea. So i came here seeking some advice.

[Finesthour 7,289]

Since this is only a sketch, there's not much people can really say for advice. It's only a sketch. Of what I can muster however, the lines that define her hair need to flow more. They're just a dark line, and it's really distracting. I'm sure this would be fixed with color, but I understand your dilemma with it. Other than that, not much more can be said.