Suggestions

[PonyBoy15 428]

Alright so I drew Rarity for like the hundredth time and I actually like how this one came out. I think I got her proportions down. Just need to touch up on a few ares. I'm not very graphic/art savvy, so how can I take this drawing to the next level? I do want to color her in but I think color pencils wouldn't look good. Would I like upload this to photoshop and go from there? Not quite sure what to do next

 

[Sir Xarthas VI 470]

I would suggest you touch up on the eyes and hair a bit. And a bit of shading would really help as well. Afterwards you could probably upload to photoshop and color her in

[Planty 1,053]

Wow this looks really good In fact this is almost perfect !

 

(I am a little tired so my comments may be a little off),

 

but Maybe her body is a little bit big on the front left. The legs seem to be great (front left leg slightly thin at the joint maybe).

 

I would also make the eyelashes and eye shadow a bit more pronounced (especially the eye lashes as they are the biggest or most stand out feature of her face really). 

 

The horn and mane look great !

 

SO yeah, very few improvements, most very un-noticeable Great drawing!

[Guest DJ Hydrolicious]

Not bad at all. It looks pretty damn good for a drawing/outline of rarity. Its almost spot on. I really having nothing bad to say about it.