visual art Disney deer drawing test *Please criticize*

[Slice0Pie 815]

I am practicing drawing, and I am focusing on Disney deer, like Bambi, and less on ponies now.

Here is my first drawing of a Disney deer:

Please critizize and give me advice!

Thanks!

[Grand_Finale 529]

The legs are pretty good, though the head could use some work. The top seems to have a bit of a bump, and I think you may have forgotten the tail  im really impressed with the legs though

 

Just a side note, ive noticed a few topics youve started for your artwork, Might I suggest a thread where you continually upload artwork, it would be more convenient for you and your fans, just a thought, feel free to discard it  

[Slice0Pie 815]

The legs are pretty good, though the head could use some work. The top seems to have a bit of a bump, and I think you may have forgotten the tail  im really impressed with the legs though

 

Just a side note, ive noticed a few topics youve started for your artwork, Might I suggest a thread where you continually upload artwork, it would be more convenient for you and your fans, just a thought, feel free to discard it  

Thanks!

Ya, I will work on the head

I tried to start a thread, but I either somehow lose it, it turns unactive and I seem to post for no reason *Which I don't like*, or it just doesn't work out xD

[DoctorBacon 3]

Ok  to go along the critic you already have had very rarely has walt had characters with side style/squinting eyes the points of his eyes on animals usually go up unless he is depicting a bad guy where they would slightly slant.

 

Along to go with the eyes theory. Deers are very wary creatures meaning that they are always on the look out so wide eyes would suit the character a bit better.

 

But the legs are looking good and and body is good you need to add that tail but apart from that it is starting to look like a real good piece of art

Edited September 22, 2013 by DoctorBacon