Sad Fluttershy

[Bronyette 835]

Just a quick art I made. It was originally going to just be a silhouette,but I gave it a little bit of shading and stuff. Critique Please!

 

 

Made with Artrage and a Mouse.

 

I might fix it up when I have time to spare.

Edited September 25, 2013 by Bronyette

[a Pegasus Pony 134]

Not that bad. looks really nice but with a bit more shading and a one direction Light source it would look astounding! Still by the jaw line there is a little bump, wonder what that is.

[Bronyette 835]

Not that bad. looks really nice but with a bit more shading and a one direction Light source it would look astounding! Still by the jaw line there is a little bump, wonder what that is.

A bump? I'm not too sure what you see there. Maybe where it shows her head is above her neck? I can't tell. If that is what you mean, than I do it because I think it looks a tad weird without it. But maybe thats just me.

[Mephala 2,633]

I'm still not sorry for kneeing her in the face.

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Oh, wow, that is really sad! Wow! Poor Fluttershy! 

<__< >__>

 

In any case, I like the art, but I think the shading is messing it up a little bit, makes it look clunky and awkward, and she looks a little boxy. I know you weren't going for super-high quality since it was a silhouette, but that's my two cents. Then again, my art doesn't get past stick figures with weird expressions.

[Bronyette 835]

I'm still not sorry for kneeing her in the face.

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Oh, wow, that is really sad! Wow! Poor Fluttershy! 

<__< >__>

 

In any case, I like the art, but I think the shading is messing it up a little bit, makes it look clunky and awkward, and she looks a little boxy. I know you weren't going for super-high quality since it was a silhouette, but that's my two cents. Then again, my art doesn't get past stick figures with weird expressions.

XD

So how could I make this look a bit less 'boxy'? Is it the floofy mane? And I probably could just strip away the shading since I have it on a nice transparent layer. I'll try that tommorow.