I could use some Critique with my comic

[Flicker 141]

This might not make much sense out of context, so if you want to you can look here: http://ask-irondash.tumblr.com/tagged/losing-it but you certainly don't have to. What I need to know is if I am doing this comic book style right. Am I wasting space? Is there a more creative way to divide up panels? Did I do good with switching angles, or should I have left that alone?

[Evilshy 5,093]

Art is solid. I think the angles are fine, personally, but others more into comics than I might say differently (I do read quite a bit of manga, but that is quite stylistically different from western comics, which is what I assume you are going for).

 

Only problem I have is that the top right panel seems a bit unneeded.

 

EDIT: and by that I mean, I don't think that line is important/dramatic/cool enough to need and entire panel dedicated to saying it

Edited October 10, 2013 by Evilshy