Request Spring leaves: Just a morning harvest

[Bugplayer 720]

Hai!

 

It's been a while since my last drawing, a few things got in my way 

Anyways. This is a request I got in one of my deviation.

 

And also, I tried a new shading technique advised by someone on Deviant art, which works so pretty if you ask me!

 

I had a lot of fun working on it. Though I think the background could use a little tweak.

Tried to throw a few colors in there but I can't seems to find something fitting, so bald it is! 

 

 

Source: http://bugplayer.deviantart.com/art/Request-Spring-leaves-Just-a-morning-harvest-407064967

 

If you see something out of place or that could be improved, feel free to have your opinion!

 

Re-uploaded because I Just forgot to put my signature, which happend way to frecently.

Thanks to my brain having the derp hehe

[LittleRawr 679]

Wow, it's simply amazing! 

 

Since I'm not much of an artist, my criticism can be potentially wrong and is a bit biased :v

 

I think the wing should be a bit longer, the end of it should continue from under the bag. The anatomy of the front(raised) hoof seems a little awkward. It feels like the reflection in her eyes is a bit off, but I'm not sure. 

 

Otherwise, I love it! It all goes together very well, especially everything 

[Bugplayer 720]

Wow, it's simply amazing! 

 

Since I'm not much of an artist, my criticism can be potentially wrong and is a bit biased :v

 

I think the wing should be a bit longer, the end of it should continue from under the bag. The anatomy of the front(raised) hoof seems a little awkward. It feels like the reflection in her eyes is a bit off, but I'm not sure. 

 

Otherwise, I love it! It all goes together very well, especially everything 

 

Well, the wing does continue a little bit under the bag. But it's practically white on white so it may be hard a little bit to see

And yes, the front hoof does seems a little awkward. I probably should have made her leg a little bit skinnier near her body.

I'll take that in note for the next drawing! ^.^

Edited October 16, 2013 by Bugplayer

[Bronyette 835]

Wow bugplayer, looks so super awesome! I particularly love how you shaded it.

 

I certainly need to commission you sometime... well after I get some more points or money anyways (besides the points you gave me, that just wouldn't be fair )

 

Keep up the awesome work!

[Bugplayer 720]

Wow bugplayer, looks so super awesome! I particularly love how you shaded it.

 

I certainly need to commission you sometime... well after I get some more points or money anyways (besides the points you gave me, that just wouldn't be fair )

 

Keep up the awesome work!

 

Haha I didn't know you were around here! :3

 

But for now, I don't ask anything for commissions, I don't think my stuff is quality enough to ask money for it.

I got a little Derpy to finish, and after, I may consider doing something about your Oc. ^.^

[Bronyette 835]

Haha I didn't know you were around here! :3

 

But for now, I don't ask anything for commissions, I don't think my stuff is quality enough to ask money for it.

I got a little Derpy to finish, and after, I may consider doing something about your Oc. ^.^

Awesome! :3 I would certainly love that!

 

And I think your art is worth it! I will still probably tip you a bit for your work. It would only be fair.