[New OCs] Eldur and Sweet Shine

[Pulcinella 1,016]

Eldur (Left)

Being the older sister, Eldur is rather annoyed by Sweet Shine. She's always been a huge fan of fire, and is proud to call herself a pyro. Her name literally means Firefox in Icelandic, which she believes is a much better name than her sister's. The idea for her first came from the sudden urge to draw a new OC with a lighter for a cutie mark.

 

Sweet Shine (Right)

Being the younger sister, Sweet Shine wants to be just like Eldur. She's always happy and bubbly, and loves candy, often compared to Pinkie Pie. Her name refers to her love for sunshine and happiness, and she likes her name better than her older sister's. I decided that Eldur would be cooler with a little sister that follows her around.

[Dj Manjaro 393]

Your line art is pretty good, but your lighting effects could use some work. Sweet shine's hair looks good as it goes with the grain in her hair, while Eldur's doesn't.

Also, The bottom of Sweet Shine's right hind leg looks like it should fill in with her body.

 

Other than that, it's pretty good.