Comments on "Breaking the Cycle"?

[DukeofCanterlot 158]

Hey everypony!
Please let me know what you think of my fanfic so far..this is my first MLP fanfic.

I hope you're liking it. Got a lot of twists and turns coming up. 

Anything you really like? Don't like?

Will likely have Chapter 3 up by tonight.

[BalanceBrony 259]

Could you post the link to your fanfic? There are multiple fanfics which use the phrase "breaking the cycle" in their titles.

[DukeofCanterlot 158]

http://mlpforums.com/topic/77627-breaking-the-cycle-chapter-1/ 

and

http://mlpforums.com/topic/77627-breaking-the-cycle-chapter-2/

http://mlpforums.com/topic/77627-breaking-the-cycle-chapter-3/

I hope that helps... will probably combine all the chapters into one thread though, probably easier to navigate in that way.

Edited November 8, 2013 by DukeofCanterlot