Reuel(Crystal Slave) 287 November 10, 2013 Share November 10, 2013 Hey everypony! This is the first chapter of my second FIMFic, which I hope you'll enjoy reading! Synopsis: Twilight's eager to test out a new Starswirl the Bearded spell, and Rainbow Dash is going to be her test subject. What's the worst that could happen? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/144488/unicorn-syndrome My Music Channel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Hood 102 November 13, 2013 Share November 13, 2013 (edited) What's the worst that could happen?Cupcakes, of course. But those are never words you want to hear... Be back in approximately ten minutes to give a through review! ***6 minutes later*** Well, that was a nice read. There's not much I can say about it, but the grammar's good and the story is quite suspenseful- SO. MUCH. TENSION!!!!! (On a side note, how the heck was I able to to guess the result? It wasn't hinted or anything. The scariest part is that this isn't the first time this has happened. Am I physic?) Edited November 13, 2013 by EpicHarmony Star Belle-(http://mlpforums.com...tar-belle-r4493 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Frost 731 November 15, 2013 Share November 15, 2013 Hey everypony! This is the first chapter of my second FIMFic, which I hope you'll enjoy reading! Synopsis: Twilight's eager to test out a new Starswirl the Bearded spell, and Rainbow Dash is going to be her test subject. What's the worst that could happen? http://www.fimfiction.net/story/144488/unicorn-syndrome did you take down your story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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