WsConanRoyal 63 November 24, 2013 Share November 24, 2013 (edited) Hello everypony, and welcome to the official thread for my upcoming MLP fan fiction, My Little Pony: The Dark Stars. MLP:TDS will be a one shot fan fiction centering around a time long after FiM. However, to begin this story, I need some help from all of you, most specifically with characters. The following is all the information I have for the story so far, as well as a Character form. Use said form to submit your own OCs for use. Style*********My Little Pony: The Dark Stars will NOT be written in typical chapter style. The FiM-fiction will be written in episodic style instead, with each "episode" being like a chapter in it's own right. Each one will have a different focus, and the entire story, or season, will have the main focus of the story listed below. This is something I have not previously done for a story, so it will be a fun ride.Story**********Starrirder is a young Pegasus pony living in Ponyville. She's just entered the real world and is trying to make a life for herself while working at the Ponyville Cafe as a waitress. One day, the famous Canterlot stage-play celebrity Sevulva Star visits Ponyville to perform his newest play when the skies are suddenly enveloped by black stars that shine bright in the day, and cover the regular stars during nighttime. Starrider must now join forces with five other ponies and search for the long lost Elements of Harmony, as well as the Princesses who disappeared along with them.Characters*****************Starrider Storm - An orphaned pony living in Ponyville. After moving out of her older sister's house, she's begun to live life on her own. Brash and wild, she dreams of one day flying to the stars. She is competitive but very kindly, and loves jokes. Her cutie mark is a star, representing her love for the sky and stars.Agelian Wingblade - A pony living outside of the Everfree Forest. Agelian is headstrong and compulsive, often acting on a whim. He will fight for what he believes in, even if it means hurting others. Very competitive, he loves to race other pegasus ponies and will usually show off. His cutie mark is a racing flag, representing his quick nature and love for races.Grace Storm - Starrider's older sister and only living relative. Grace was an apprentice of the late Rarity, and now runs the former Mane 6 members dress shop, the Carousel Boutique. She is kind and helpful, always catering to others and doing things around town. She is very protective of her younger sister. Her cutie mark is a sowing needle, representing her love of dress making.Briance Seichter - Starrider's best friend since childhood, Briance is an Earth pony with a passion for adventures. She will often leave Ponyville, travelling the land and exploring whatever she can. She has seen a lot of Equestria, despite her young age. She is rambunctious and fun-loving, wild and carefree. However, she will help out with anything whenever she is asked. Her cutie mark is a hook-ended rope, displaying her love of adventure.Chupa Cabra - A young Earth pony who lives next door to Starrider with her family. Chupa is a shy and quiet pony with rattling nerves. She tends to keep to herself, but if given the chance, prefers the company of plant life. Starrider is one of the few ponies she feels truly comfortable about, and will often follow her around in hopes of being useful. Her cutie mark is a leaf, symbolizing her fragile nature and love of plants.Chamomile Cabra - Chupa's mother and owner of Ponyville's tea shop. She is outgoing and loud, contrasting her daughters shyness. Loving attention, Chamomile will often go out of the way to talk to people and make friends. She is helpful as well, and always takes care of anything that is asked of her. Her cutie mark is that of a teapot, symbolizing her love for making and serving tea.Devlin Speedster - Ponyville's own working-class hero, Devlin is a unicorn pony who refuses to utilize magic in everyday tasks. Hard working and strong, he is often seen fixing buildings or pulling large carts of goods for others. He sometimes takes tasks harder than he can handle because he wishes to prove himself and be able to do more for others. He is a closet admirer of the famous Applejack, wishing to have the honest, hard-working nature she did. His cutie mark is a checkered flag pattern, representing his will to push himself harder and always come out on top.Terra Lionmane - A strong and valiant knight in Princess Aura's royal guard. He values honor and duty above all else, and has tenacity that other ponies would be jealous of. He always acts like a valiant "knight in shining armor" for his friends and family. He is punctual and values his friendships. His cutie mark is a ruby heart locked inside of a star, representing his fiery heart and passion. (created by nioniosbbbb)Sevulva Star - A famous Canterlot stage actor known for his dramatic plays. He is snobby and arrogant, often putting himself before others. He treats his personal assistant horribly, live a slave even, and is more than willing to put others out to further his own ambitions. His cutie mark is the masks of drama and comedy, representing his talent for acting.Other Characters**************************Princess Aura - The Princess watching over Equestria and most specifically Canterlot. Since the disappearance of Princesses Celestia and Luna years and years ago, Princess Aura's family has been in charge of the kingdom. With Aura taking the throne, Equestria is at an unsettling peace. Her cutie mark is a shining star, representing hope and a bright future. Fluttershy - The last living member of the Mane 6, she currently lives in her cottage, caring for animals in her old age. She is kindly and gentle. Her cutie mark is butterflies, representing her love for animals as well as her gentle nature. Princess Celestia - One of the deity-like leaders of Equestria. She went missing ages ago, along with her younger sister Luna, leaving Equestria in the hooves of Princess Twilight and Princess Cadence. Her cutie mark is the sun, representing how she rules over the day and raises the sun after night ends. Princess Luna - One of the deity-like leaders of Equestria. She went missing ages ago, along with her elder sister Celestia, leaving Equestria in the hooves of Princess Twilight and Princess Cadence. Her cutie mark is a crescent moon, representing how she rules over the night and raises the moon at the end of daytime. Pound & Pumpkin Cake - The owners of Sugarcube Corner, Pound is the son of former owners Mr. & Mrs. Cake, and Pumpkin is his twin sister. Pound's cutie mark is a cake pan, representing his love for baking. Pumpkin's is a pumpkin, representing her love for farming and raising the ingredients used in Sugarcube Corner's foods. Applebloom - The owner of Sweet Apple Acres, she works alongside her family to farm apples for Ponyville. Her cutie mark is an apple being cut by a saw, representing her love of working hard for the acres and apples in general. Sweetie Belle - An employee of the Carousal Boutique, she works under Grace Storm as the chief gem gatherer and salespony. She is in charge of finding and collecting gems for Grace, as well as running the counter. She dreams of one day being a world famous singer. Her cutie mark is a musical note, representing her passion for singing. Scootaloo - The leader of the Wonderbolts, she is the apprentice and friend of former leader Rainbow Dash. She is wild and crazy, but has a good heart and loves to work with others. She is a strong flyer, despite her early-life troubles. Her cutie mark is a speeding wheel, representing her outstanding speed and flying skills. Babs Seed - A worker at Sweet Apple Acres, having moved from Manehattan following Applejack's death to help Applebloom take over. She is a strong worker and loves to do whatever she can to help. Her cutie mark is an apple seed, representing her love for apples and working hard.Maaebjan - A violent and childish unicorn. He has vicious tendencies and believes that his victims enjoy being hurt and teased. He enjoys being hurt as well as hurting others. He prefers to scream when speaking to incite fear in his victims. His cutie mark is a purple cloud, representing a unique magic ability he has to create portals.Character Form***********************NameAgeGenderSpeciesCutie MarkPersonalityBackstoryOther Information*basically the same information as on the roleplay characters form, so you can use that. Use as much detail as you possibly can, because otherwise I might not get your character as right as you would want me to. Edited November 30, 2013 by GeekBAH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hive King 2,001 November 24, 2013 Share November 24, 2013 I'll use all my OCs, take your pick from them http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/vokun-r4779 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/tenebris-r4777 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/black-heart-r4751 http://mlpforums.com...s/_/iwiek-r4785 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/krylock-r4934 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/skuldaf-r4939 http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/kel-r5089 1 "Aren’t we the same? You know, aren’t you carrying the same mindset as I am? Just because you couldn’t bear to lose, you lost your precious partner! You really call yourself a true duelist? You’re the complete opposite of that!" -Weevil Underwood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Hood 102 November 25, 2013 Share November 25, 2013 The link is in my signature, pick whichever one you want, also I have no idea what this is crossing over with. Tell me when this comes out. Star Belle-(http://mlpforums.com...tar-belle-r4493 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WsConanRoyal 63 November 25, 2013 Author Share November 25, 2013 The link is in my signature, pick whichever one you want, also I have no idea what this is crossing over with. Tell me when this comes out. What do you mean by what this is crossing over with? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Hood 102 November 25, 2013 Share November 25, 2013 (edited) What do you mean by what this is crossing over with?Um... Isn't this a crossover?(Also, if you want I can be your editor.) Edited November 25, 2013 by EpicHarmony Star Belle-(http://mlpforums.com...tar-belle-r4493 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WsConanRoyal 63 November 25, 2013 Author Share November 25, 2013 Um... Isn't this a crossover? (Also, if you want I can be your editor.) No, this is a FiM Fiction that takes place years after FiM and all. It's not a crossover. And before we worry about editing, I need to get the story fully planned. But yeah, if you want to you can be my editor. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IridscentNionios 1,420 November 25, 2013 Share November 25, 2013 @, Feel free to use Selune and Terra they are in my signature. Terra has a phoenix named Fenix. OCs Thorough list of all of them here. FimFiction Profile Deviant Art ((All OC pictures in here)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hive King 2,001 November 25, 2013 Share November 25, 2013 Came up with another OC by the name of Maaebjan http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/maaebjan-r5128 "Aren’t we the same? You know, aren’t you carrying the same mindset as I am? Just because you couldn’t bear to lose, you lost your precious partner! You really call yourself a true duelist? You’re the complete opposite of that!" -Weevil Underwood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WsConanRoyal 63 November 25, 2013 Author Share November 25, 2013 Came up with another OC by the name of Maaebjan http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/maaebjan-r5128 I like the ideas of your ocs, but tbh, they're very dark. I mean, murderous creatures and ponies. No offense at all man, as they are great creative ideas, but they wouldn't fit into my story at all. Maaebjan would be the most possible, but he'd have to be toned down for the story so that like instead of murdering, he's just overly violent or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hive King 2,001 November 25, 2013 Share November 25, 2013 I like the ideas of your ocs, but tbh, they're very dark. I mean, murderous creatures and ponies. No offense at all man, as they are great creative ideas, but they wouldn't fit into my story at all. Maaebjan would be the most possible, but he'd have to be toned down for the story so that like instead of murdering, he's just overly violent or something. Tone them down if you wish, I have no problem with that "Aren’t we the same? You know, aren’t you carrying the same mindset as I am? Just because you couldn’t bear to lose, you lost your precious partner! You really call yourself a true duelist? You’re the complete opposite of that!" -Weevil Underwood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WsConanRoyal 63 November 30, 2013 Author Share November 30, 2013 The characters have been updated. I have also attached thumbnails (because I couldn't get all the pics in otherwise) of those in the Other Characters section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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