Blargyoarble 6 January 18, 2014 Share January 18, 2014 (edited) Null null null null null Null null null null null Null null null null null Null null null null null Edited August 13, 2019 by Blargyoarble Cleansing my past 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev 38 January 18, 2014 Share January 18, 2014 (edited) Um....You are kinda missing a eye and the one you do have is a bit to centered, kinda looks like a cyclops. The line art is pretty good though.Also is she meant to have a tail or not? Edited January 18, 2014 by Rev Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shift 4,274 January 18, 2014 Share January 18, 2014 Okie dokie, I don't mean to be a downer but a couple of stuff. Where's the other eye? The current eye's coloring is a bit too thin, try to make it larger. Also attempt to round it out. The mane is VERY scrappy, I'd advise just making it look cleaner. No offense but it just looks... very noticeable. Maybe thin out the lines at the end? Yeah, try to thin out the lines. Is he supposed to have a tail? The line art is fairly good, though i'd have the neck a bit more thin. Have the courage to think and act on your own. And have the courage to disobey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blargyoarble 6 January 26, 2014 Author Share January 26, 2014 (edited) On 1/18/2014 at 6:47 AM, Rev said: Null null null null null null null Null null null null null null null Null null null null null null null On 1/18/2014 at 7:06 AM, Champion Shift said: Null null null null null null null Null null null null null null null Null null null null null null null Edited August 13, 2019 by Blargyoarble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rev 38 January 27, 2014 Share January 27, 2014 Thanks for the advice, and about the tail, I brainfarted on that xD Lol, I do the same with horns and wings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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