private the adventures of the shy dragonriding pony moonshy

[moonshy 27]

Moonsy is a simple farming pony, living in a village in a secluded corner of a country known as Equestria. So far, so tame.

One day, while out hunting, she hears an explosion in the woods. When she investigates, she finds a blue stone in the middle of the wreckage. Thinking she might sell it for some food (seeing as how it scared off all the deer—way to go, exploding rock), she takes it home.

Back at the farm, she tells her Uncle Garrow (who has raised her from childhood) and cousin Roran about what she found. When they can't sell the stone, moonshy ends up keeping it in her room. Then, late one night, the stone squeaks. Then it cracks. Then out pops a dragon. Well, then.

When she touches the dragon, Moonshy is overcome with a charge of energy. sHe seems to have developed a mental link with it, and she's got a white scar on his paw to show for it.

Moonshy ends up hiding the dragon in the woods, sneaking off to bond with it as the creature gets bigger and bigger. Over time, their bond develops and Moonshy names this she-dragon Saphira. But trouble comes to town. Two shady characters show up asking about the stone, so Saphira grabs moonshy and they hightail it (literally—she flies on her back) out of town.

 

and meanwhile it is goingvery bad with the army of king galbatorix so he is recruiting some ponies and he is killing poepple for breaking the rules but the rules are not so but the king was going mad and now he has the task to kill him but first she has to search for a team and luckily she found de thunderdash and his brother and they are training her in the art of swordfighting and magic. 

 

only moonshy with moonshy

only thunderdash with thunderdash and electra blitz

only darget with silver wing

Edited June 5, 2014 by moonshy

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

Thunder and Blitz were out on their patrol around Equestria. As they flew across the farmlands on the southern part of Equestria, they saw a little filly with what appeared to be a dragon. "What? Blitz, are you seeing this? How did that filly get that dragon. Let's go down and ask." Thunder stated. "Right on bro!" Blitz stated as they both descended down to the ground to meet the filly.

 

@@moonshy, 

[moonshy 27]

when moonshy was trying to ask why the saphira took him away from his uncle she was only thinking : murderers they will rip me.

and finally when i asked her she said we are no match for them . suddenly she hears two voices  and looked around then what she saw scared her the thundertwins have seen her with a dragon she trys to flee but saphira hold her. now what is this asked the brothers i said: i am moonshy and this is my dragon saphira?

 

 

@Thunder-Dash

Edited March 1, 2014 by moonshy

[Dargent 80]

Silver Wing smiled as he exited the inn.He found stealing so enjoyable.He gasped as he saw a colt fly by riding a dragon "What kind of pony can ride a dragon?" He asked himself.A rich one. he thought. The smile returned to his face."lets see just how rich you are." He said flying towards the dragon.

[moonshy 27]

when silver wing asked i said no, i am just a little farming filly . but i lost my home my uncle and now i want my revenge but how am i supposed to kill a migty alicorn king but then i saw some shiny in the woods and what i found was the legendry blade of awe the blade of the first dragonrider i thought omg how can i ever handle this sword but as i take it i feel some strange powers and the blade is as light as a fether so i took it .

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

Thunder and Blitz landed in front of the little filly. "Hi! My names Thunder Dash. Now, don't think that me and bro are here to hurt you. We were just curious due to the fact that we've never seen a pony with a dragon before. Do you need help to figure out what this means about you?" Thunder asked. Blitz just looked on.  

[moonshy 27]

well i scared because i thought i was seeing double but those are just twin brothers and then i asked what sword i have found . when i said i have no uncle and home anymore and i wanted my revenge on the evli king galbatorix. i said we had to go to the varden the rebellions in the beor mountains the highst mountains in equestria but the journey will be dagerous with much of fights and dangerous ponies are about to kill me so i took the twins and silver wing for a walk in the woods were they started to ask me things

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

Thunder and Blitz walked with the little filly. "Oh, I don't think we got your name." Blitz stated. Thunder was in deep thought. "How could this little filly obtain this dragon. The only possible way I could think of is just finding the egg. I'll ask her about that." Thunder stated as he kept walking.

 

(OOC: No offense but...you need to fix your grammar a bit. You've got loads of run-on sentences and other errors. Also, it is preferred that you RP in the 3rd person point of view.)

[moonshy 27]

@, 

 

One day, while out hunting, i heard an explosion in the woods. When i investigate it,i  found a blue stone in the middle of the wreckage. Thinking i might sell it for some food (seeing as how it scared off all the deer—way to go, exploding rock), i took it home.

Back at the farm, i told my Uncle Garrow (who has raised me from childhood) and cousin Roran about what i found. When they can't sell the stone, i ended up keeping it in her room. Then, late one night, the stone squeaks. Then it cracks. Then out pops a dragon. Well, then.

When i touched the dragon, i was overcome with a charge of energy. i seem to have developed a mental link with it, and i got a white scar on his hoof to show for it.

so that is how it hapenend

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

"Ah...so...I'm guessing that you're "The Chosen Rider"!" Thunder suddenly concluded. "And if I'm correct, then...someone's after you. They want to get that dragon away from you so they can perform evil tasks with it." Blitz stated. "You may be right about that." Thunder said still thinking about what they should do. "Well...one thing we can do is protect you from anything...well...I know that dragon's now loyal to you because it established that connection." Thunder added as he continued to think. Maybe it was true. Maybe this little filly was destined to be a well known dragon rider and hero.

 

(OOC: Also, speech should be in quotations in RPs. This way, it wouldn't be confusing. Copy the way I RP. It should then make things a lot more clear. Sorry, I'm just a grammar Nazi.)

[moonshy 27]

@, 

 

 

yes it is treu moonshy said and my task is sadly killing king galbatorix and one question about this sword , moonshy showes the sword to the brothers what sword is this . moonshy was in a little village when suddenly some batponies attacked them moonshy usses the sword to kill them but one pony killed her almost and she was not fast enough and the she did somthing nopony expected she said brisingr and suddenly the batpony was on fire 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

"Maybe...that sword has a connection with you and the dragon....and this evil Galbaterix you're talking about...maybe he didn't want you to get that stone, that turned to be a dragon egg." Thunder stated. "And that means...Galbaterix is after you! We'll protect you the best you could. You're only a little filly so...we're gonna have to teach you combat skills and everything in order to survive." Blitz and Thunder stated at the same time.  

[moonshy 27]

@,  

but how about that word and that pony that shoot on fire when i said that word is that normal she asked

she was thinking about why she was the chosen one and not one of the heroes . on that moment the pony brom arives

brom asked so you have find some friends. moonshy answerred yes but do i know you

(brom apears to be her father and a dragonrider too but his dragon died centuries ago in the fight against durza a dark shade he was playing he was just an old storyteller of the village were she lived) and she said to the thunder brothers, sorry i am rude i am moonshy. 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

(OOC: That was confusing to read...no offense, but you REALLY need to fix your grammar)

 

Thunder and Blitz introduced themselves to Brom. "Well...we're also offering to help figure out your little filly's destiny here. We supposed that since she found this dragon egg, an evil foe, which she knows by the name of King Galbaterix, is after her." Thunder stated.  

[moonshy 27]

@, 

but brom if you are going with you can get killed moonshy said to brom . when she was walking away saphira said to him : he haas to go with us or i will not go . then moonshy said brom you can come with but be carefull then he smiled and said you becarefull

btw a picture of brom the last dragonrider 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

"Okay...looks like we've got a decent group here." Thunder stated as he gathered some electricity and made both his and Blitz's double bladed staves appear. "Well then...where should we go to find out more about this dragon and...Moonshy?" Blitz asked as he gripped his staff.  

[moonshy 27]

 

Well galbatorix destroyed all the information about dragonriders so we can ask brom for info but he seem to disapeared .

When the thunder brothers were taking their swords saphira gived a big roar to say you two are sscaring my rider but saphira did not attack because she know i need them so she stopped roaring but not complete. When moonshy saw they took their stafs she took her blade and it was glowing of some yellow light i asked what that could be

Ooc this is made by my mobile phone

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

(OOC: I can tell. You can still quote me though.)

 

Thunder and Blitz saw the gleaming sword. "That sword...I think it has some connection with you and the dragon. Because of how you and the dragon have energy's synchronized, that could give the sword some power." Thunder stated as he gathered some electricity and ran it through his staff. The staff started to glow.  

[moonshy 27]

@, 

moonshy was going to make a camp, the fire was not starting and at that moment brom has came and trying it but he got frustrated and what he said was brisingr and the fire sterted then he was making some training swords out of sticks and threw it to moonshy. moonshy catched the stick and brom was standing in fighting position. moonshy said but brom you are ... old!!?? said brom , well let see if you make a chance of winning this training fight. moonshy started easy but then she discovered brom was a very goed swordfighter and she lost. then they all are eating delicious deer flesh. then moonshy asked to blitz, blitz why is youre staff glowing in  thunderstorm.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

"That's because I'm holding it with my telekinesis." Blitz answered. "And mine's glowing because I'm running my electricity through it." Thunder stated. Thunder then twirled his staff around, threw it into the air and sprang after it. He then caught it and landed with his wings spread. "Showoff..." Blitz said softly.  

[moonshy 27]

@, 

 

ok well uhm how did you got youre stafs ore swords or what are they called moonshy said. back at the camp when she had the training fight moonshy was exhausted  and she fell asleep before she got into her ten. when she woke up in the morning brom was already breaking down the camp and said i have to go because you have good help and go to the varden the only resist against galbatorix.

but first fly to alageäsia and go to a place named Teirm. but how do i can get there if i am in alageäsia just moonshy asked. just ask the ponies there and one thing do not let them see youre dragon brom said. moonshy was flying with the group to alageäsia.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

Thunder and Blitz woke and met Moonshy again. "So...where to this morning?" Thunder asked as he gathered electricity and made his double bladed staff appear from the blue. Blitz had his in his hooves and hovered it in his telekinetic abilities.

 

(OOC: Let me know when you're gonna skip to the next day. Or divide your post into sections using the underscore like this.

 

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See, just like that) 

[moonshy 27]

alagaësia moonshy said. when they were flying to alagaësia they got hit by a big thunderstorm and even a tornado in the middle of the ocean. moonshy was crying with fear becauuse she never saw such thing she only was holding on one of saphira's spikes. then what happenend she did not know but she got a vision ,a special pony that looks like an elf was asking him for help in gil-leäd she was in prison and was one of the most beautifull mares she saw so when they were landed moonshy woke and she said it to the brothers. the brothers answerer.  then moonshy asked confused what happenend how could we here yet.

Edited March 3, 2014 by moonshy

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

@@moonshy,

 

Thunder went over to Moonshy and held her close to her tightly. "Don't worry. Blitz and I will protect you." Thunder stated. Blitz was holding his staff. He then started to twirl it really fast, which created a strong wind. The wind was strong enough to repel some of the storm. "See, Blitz is gonna clear the storm for us!" Thunder stated as he continued to hold on to Moonshy.  

[moonshy 27]

@,

 

moonshy was asking: what thing is that ,when she pointed at the tornado. moonshy wass trying to communicate with her dragon but the dragon was too far away. then moonshy was caught by panic. then they all landed safely on the beach of alagaësia then they asked somepony for the city Teirm . the pony smiled and laughed he said and what does a little filly need thhere with such big word, i think you can not hold it. he laughed and moonshy bursted in tears.