Unknown Past

[Deae Rising Shine~ 56,296]

After I finished my first FanFic

http://mlpforums.com/topic/89238-unexpected-destiny/

 

I start to make another one. This will have nothing to do with my first FanFic, so everyone, who expect a sequel now ... nope.

 

Well see, how good this will come, have fun or not, your decision^^

 

Unknown past

Prolog:

"C'mon, Fluttershy, let's hang out by the lake. Nopony has time, but you HAVE time."

"But ..."

"Don't tell me, you scared of water?"

"No ... b-but it is ... it's cold."

"Only in the beginning, how longer you in, how warmer it goes. Please, it's so booriiiiing alone."

"Well ... uhm, okay."

"Thanks Fluttershy!"

Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy making there way to the lake. It's not so far away from Fluttershy's home. After 10 minutes, they finally reach the lake.

"Okay, let's go to the water!"

"Uhm ... is it okay, when I ... laying on the sand?"

"C'mon Flutters."

"I ..."

"Well, more fun for me!"

Rainbow fly high in the air. After she stop, she make her way fast to the ground ... faster ... faster ... BOOOOOOM! She breaks the sound barrier. A rainbow sound wave goes to the whole sky. She smashed in the water ... A lots of water is flying ... on Fluttershy.

"EEEKKK!!!"

Rainbow is now under the water. She dive, until she see something. Rainbow is wondering, diving deeper. When she comes closer, she see, that this is a pony. Rainbow take the drowning pony out of the water.

"Fluttershy, quick!"

Fluttershy, wet and surprised, runs to them.

"W-what happening? Who is this?"

"Dunno, found him in the water."

It was a brown stallion, with black mane and tail. His Cutie mark is a hammer.

"Looks like, he wasn't long under water, I bring him to the hospital."

Rainbow Dash take the stallion and fly fast to the hospital. But Rainbow start to question, who this pony is ...

 

 

chapter 1: Without a past

I open my eyes. My head hurts a lot. I can't remember ANYTHING! Okay, first ... what are you? I realized, that I'm laying ... in a bed. Looks like, I realized objects and so on. But can't remember anything about my past life. No people ... no things I done ... nothing. I look to my ... hooves. Okay, looks like, I'm a ... pony. I think. I watch my whole body. Yep, brown fur ... and a black tail. And I have something on my flank ... picture from a hammer. Did I live here? In this world as a pony? Okay, calm down, you don't even met other ponies ... or whatever here lives. I looking around. It looks like a room ... in an hospital. Okay, that mayby explains, why I can't remember anything about me or my past. Wait, I hear something coming.

"... looking, if he wa ... oh, you are awake, sir."

"Where am I?"

Okay, this is another pony ... at least, I'm no alien or something. And we can talk normal, good.

"You are in the hospital. Somepony brings you here."

"Somepony?"

"Her name is Rainbow Dash. By the way, what is your name?"

"I ... can't remember anything about my life. I recognize objects, I recognize, that I'm a pony and it looks like, we speaking the same language."

"Looks like you have amnesia. Okay, you better stay here."

"Where did this ... Rainbow Dash, right? Where did she found me?"

"In an lake, under water."

"What did I do under water?!"

"Good question, We all don't know. Try to sleep."

"But I'm fine ... okay, I can't remember about me, but my body is fine."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes ... mayby that pony, that found me, Rainbow Dash. Mayby she ... or he ..."

"She."

"... she knows more about me."

"All right. But you have to come every day, so long I saying it."

"Sure."

I get away from the bed ... and falling.

"You should really ..."

"I'm fine ... just need time."

I stand up and start walking slowly.

"See? Just need some time."

"All right then ... follow me. I show you the way out of the hospital. But if you feel bad ... come back."

"Okay, I will."

I follow the doctor. In some of the rooms, where de door was open, their laying other ponies. It don't take long, when we reached the exit.

"You should think about a name. So long you don't know your real one."

"Give me time, I think about that."

I walk outside.

"Wow ..."

It looks wonderful. The ponies talking, laughing or walking. They all looking happy.

"Hello."

One of the ponies come too me.

"Uhm, hello."

"Are you new here? I don't think, I saw you before."

"Well, I don't know. Can't remember my past."

"Don't worry, you going to like it here. I'm normally  not the pony, who start a conversation, but you look like, you could need help. Hey, do you want to come to my house? You can relax there. After that, we can go to Ponyville, I show you everything then."

"Sounds good to me."

He was a stallion. Cyan blue fur, darker blue mane and tail.

"Do you at least, knowing your name?"

"No, I'm sorry."

"Well, my name is Rising Shine. Ah, we are already here."

He open the door to his house and I follow him inside.

"Sit on the chair. I make something to drink."

He went to the kitchen. I go to the chair and sit down. They are really friendly here. I mean, that pony, Rising, he don't even know me and he let me go to his house already. This feel so wrong. After few minutes, he comes back.

"Here, drink."

"Thank you."

I take a sip.

"So, you know, how to move, hold things and so on ... but not about your past?"

"Yes."

"Sounds bad."

"Can't remember if my life was good or bad."

"Hey, you can sleep here if you want."

"What?"

"I don't think, you have money for a hotel, right?"

"Right."

"See? Just stay here this night. I have no problem with this."

"That is really nice for you ... I mean, you don't know me."

"That means, I know everything, you know, haha."

"Haha, yeah. Thanks."

We sitting together, talking about his life, about Equestria and Ponyville, about the princesses and the elements of harmony and about cutie marks.

"Cutie marks?"

"That is the picture, you got on your flank. Looks like, yours is an hammer."

"And that means?"

"Probably something building."

"So, they saying, what you a really good in?"

"Yes. But it doesn't mean, that you are only good in this. Wow, we talk a lot, it's already 9 PM. I think, we going around tomorrow then."

"Why? Is it dangerous outside this late?"

"No, but, when everything is closed ... how can I show you all?"

"Oh, you are right. And what we are doing now?"

"I continue writing my next story. Something about lucid dreaming and a pony called Sweetfull Dream."

"Sounds good."

"Thanks. You are my guest, you can sleep in my bed."

"But ..."

"It's okay ... have you a name in mind? How I can call you?"

"How about ... hmm ... Forget Hammer? The Forget, because I can't remember my real name and the hammer, because of my cutie mark."

"Sounds strange, but okay, Hammer. Good night."

"Good night."

I went to the bed room. I lay down on the bed and try to sleep. But it take a few minutes, because I still have a question in mind: Who am I?

 

 

chapter 2: Welcome to Ponyville

I wake up, open my eyes. Thankfully, this time with my memories from yesterday. I'm still laying in the bed from Rising, the pony, who allowed me, to sleep here. I hear hoofsteps. Rising appears.

"Hey, sleep good?"

"Yeah, I sleep well, thanks."

"Good to hear that. I make something to eat and to drink, when you want, you can come to the kitchen."

You don't have to say that twice! I stand up and run to the kitchen. Take a glass with water and one of the sandwiches.

"Mhhh ... that taste awesome! Thanks, Rising!"

"Wow ... uhm ... thanks."

"Did you do them by yourself?"

"Yeah, why?"

"You should give everypony one of them, they all should know, how good you are."

"Don't have enough for everypony here."

"That's bad. Is this your book?"

"Yeah, I told you yesterday, that I'm writing stories. That is one of mine, you can read it, if you want, it's a short one."

"Sure ... but you want to show me the town, right?"

"Oh, yeah, right. We can start, whenever you want."

"Here ... you are hungry, right? Afterall, you made them."

"No, I already eat, they all for you."

He is smiling to me.

"Wow, thanks!"

"You are really hungry, hmm?"

"Definitly!"

"Take you ... wow, already finished?"

BURP.

"Uhum ... I'm finished."

"You know, you could challenge Pinkie, so fast you are eating, hahaha."

"Haha! Okay, I think, we can go now."

"Okay."

We going out. The sun is shining. A wonderful day.

"I told you, that our weather is controlled. If we want, we could start a rain, every time."

We start walking. We some ponies, doing their work or talking. Some of them say "Hello" to us or waving one hoof.

"It's really friendly here."

"Yep, it is. Of course, sometimes we get trouble. But most of the time, it's a nice place to live. That's why I living here."

"If I just could rememouch ...!"

Something bumped into me.

"Hey, are you new here? Never saw you here before?"

"Ouh ..."

I open my eyes and see a pink pony in front of me.

"Yeah, he is new here, he can't remember his past, Pinkie Pie."

"Oh ..."

Pinkie start too look upset.

"It's okay, Pinkie, you don't have too look upset."

She look into my eyes and then smiling again ... and she hug me.

"When you new here, we should make a welcome party for you, this evening!"

"Pinkie, I don't know, if it is oka ..."

"Sure, why not. From what Rising told me, you make the best parties here."

"I do! See YA!"

And she ... jump away. What an over friendly pony.

"Are you sure, you are ready for a party?"

"Sure."

"Your decision."

We continue walking. Until something bumped again me.

"Uhm ... I'm ... I'm sorry."

I open my eyes. This time it was a more grey pony.

"It's okay. It's something usual, bumping onto me, today, hahaha."

"Sorry ... have to go, delivery mail."

And she fly away.

"Who was that?"

"Derpy. She is a mailmare. And sometimes a bit confused. But I don't know, why."

We continue walking, but this time, I try to look forward, to see, if anypony going to bump me. Rising showing me the whole day important or good places in Ponyville. Even the places, where the elements of harmony are living. We talking a bit, before we went to the library. It is already evening, party going to start soon. We reach the library. Pinkie Pie is already waiting. When she realized, that we are coming, she screams and run into the library.

"Is she always doing this?"

"More or less."

We went in ... and get really surprised.

"SURPRISSSSEEEE!!!!"

"Wow, that is awesome!"

The room was full with confetti, stripes and balloons. A stack full with presents. And a desk with food and a bowl with ... what is this?

"Hey, what is this to drink?"

"In the bowl? Apple cider."

"Thanks. Hey, it's really loud here."

"This is a party, what do you expect? Haha! Just have fun."

Having fun, all right. I go to the desk, take a cup with cider and drink it ... it taste really good. Then I take some from the food and sweets on my plate.

"HEY! LET'S DANCE!"

"What?!"

Pinkie Pie take me to the middle and start to dance. Everypony is looking to us, so I start slowly to dance ... and I think, I'm really good. Together, we dance, while everypony around us clapping their hoofs, screaming, laughing and whistle loud.

"You really good!"

"Thanks, Pinkie!"

Rising told me, that she always bringing ponies to smile ... and he was right. Laughing and smiling I dance until midnight. I come slowly down.

"Thanks, Pinkie ... need ... to rest ... to sleep ..."

She hug me and I make my way back to Rising's house. The door is open. Rising sleeping on the ground. I close the door, say "Good night" to Rising and went to bed. This day was awesome!

 

 

chapter 3: Meet my savior

"Hey, wake up, it's already 11 AM."

I open my eyes and look to Rising.

"Long party, hmm?"

"Yeah."

"Rainbow Dash was here, she knows, that you sleeping by me, so she ask, if you are here. I told her, that you are still sleeping. Rainbow was the one, who save you. She comes later again."

"One of the elemts, right? How is she?"

"Fall for her?"

"No, just asking."

"Well, she is nice and loyal ... but sometimes she can really getting fast angry."

"I see, better not going on her nerves, right?"

"Better not, haha. I make some sandwiches for y ..."

I run fast to the kitchen and take one.

"THAMMMKSSS!!!!"

"NO PROBLEM!"

Few seconds later, he enter the kitchen.

"That was fast."

"THAM ...!"

"Don't talk with food in your mouth."

I finish eating.

"Thanks."

We eat together, until it knocks on the door.

"Mayby Rainbow, I going."

Rising stand up and went too the door. He comes back with a cyan blue mare.

"Nice too see, that your fine."

"So, you saved me?"

"Yep. Found you under water. I heard, you can't remember your past, huh?"

"Yeah ..."

"What ever happen, now you are here. To bad, I can't race you."

"Why not, I can running."

"I mean flying."

"Wings, huh? Then you are a pegasi-pony, right?"

"I'm the fastest here, when not even in whole Equestria, kid."

"Really? Wow, show me!"

"Sure!"

We went outside.

"Hey, I think, you never saw a Sonic Rainboom, right?"

"Right."

"I think, you gonna like it!"

She start flying, higher and higher and higher, really fast.

"Woow ..."

Suddenly, she stop, looking to me and the she comes back to us ... faster ... and faster. But before she shmashed to the ground, a loud BOOM appears. She flies over our heads away, I looking to the sky and see a rainbow sound wave in the sky. This was beautiful and awesome! After a few minutes, she comes back.

"Any questions left?"

I can't even say one letter.

"I take that as a no. Hahaha. And what are you doing?"

"Actually, we didn't have planned something."

"Oh ... hey, uhm ..."

"Hammer."

"Hammer, wanna hang out with me?"

"But I can't fly ..."

"No problem!"

She take me suddenly and start flying high.

"Woooow, that's really high ... don't let me fall, okay?"

"Do you really think, I let you fall? Just look!"

I turn my view in front of us ... it was wonderful. The sun is shining, the clouds are wonderful fitting here and than that rainbow ... it looks awesome!

"I like Rainbow ..."

"What?"

"I-I didn't mean you ..."

"WHAT?!"

"I ..."

"Just kidding you, I know you mean the rainbow ... right?"

"R-right. How is it to fly ... I mean with wings, not captured by somepony, haha."

"Wonderfull ... flying in the sky, feeling the wind on my fur, when I fly really fast ... it's ... you can't tell that in words."

"Sounds awesome!"

"It is!"

"I wish, I could fly ... or use magic ..."

"Must be bad, hmm? But everypony have his talents, find yours ... you have an hammer as an cutie mark, mayby you could build something, so everypony can fly our use magic, who knows?"

"Hmm, mayby, haha."

She flying for hours through the sky before she land on the ground with me. It was really wonderfull, first I get feared, but how longer I was "flying", how better it feels.

"Thank you Rainbow, that was awesome!"

"I know, it was awesome, because I'm awesome, hahaha. See ya again soon."

And she dash away ... haha, dash ...

"I think, you should sleep longer today ..."

I turn around. Rising is standing there.

"Yeah ... uhm ... have something to eat?"

"Sure."

We going back to Rising's home. I eat some of his sandwiches ... how he do that, that it taste so awesome! And after that, I went to bed, smiling and happy.

 

 

(Unfinished)

Edited March 12, 2014 by Rising Shine