visual art (OLD Drawing) Snake and Skull

[Sweet Pen 1,348]

Haya ponies!
This is a old drawing that I found in my Facebook gallery.
Isn't good, i know ;-;
I tried to draw a dragon, and this happend.

[Virgil 685]

The snakes face is actually fairly well done and has a beautiful ferocity to it. It's just held back by the way in which the snake's body interacts with the skull, which makes it difficult tell what is snake and what is skull. Maybe if you added just a bit more detail on the body and the skull, and made some lines just a bit more distinct I bet it could really pop.