ipad art need opinion

[Jadusstone 52]

 

what do you think of this? i think somethings off but i cant pinpoint it. It draw on my ipad using sketchbook pro

[SkyBound 829]

I have not the faintest idea what sort of difficulty there may be with drawing on an iPad, but I think this looks rather nice considering.  The colors are rather pleasing to the eye and mesh together well with the juxtaposition of warmer color of the body and cool colors of the hair.  Though I am rather curious as to why you chose to go for a pink Celestia, it still works rather well.

 

My only concerns would be the composition itself and the head.  For the head, it seems a tad too small in comparison to the body, but that is an easy fix if seen as an issue.  As for the composition, it is normally avoided to compose a piece with important parts of a body being cut off by a border (in this case, the head) as these can become unwanted focal points that can make the entire picture look a little off.  Perhaps this is what you were referring to?

 

Regardless, I do hope you keep this sort of art up as it is always fun to experiment.  Keep up the lovely work and take care!

[Jadusstone 52]

I have not the faintest idea what sort of difficulty there may be with drawing on an iPad, but I think this looks rather nice considering.  The colors are rather pleasing to the eye and mesh together well with the juxtaposition of warmer color of the body and cool colors of the hair.  Though I am rather curious as to why you chose to go for a pink Celestia, it still works rather well.

 

My only concerns would be the composition itself and the head.  For the head, it seems a tad too small in comparison to the body, but that is an easy fix if seen as an issue.  As for the composition, it is normally avoided to compose a piece with important parts of a body being cut off by a border (in this case, the head) as these can become unwanted focal points that can make the entire picture look a little off.  Perhaps this is what you were referring to?

 

Regardless, I do hope you keep this sort of art up as it is always fun to experiment.  Keep up the lovely work and take care!

i was going for an off pink celestia..as shes actually got a pink shade to her..according to andy price copic markers http://andypriceart.deviantart.com/journal/Copic-Markers-and-Pony-colors-408215100 i like the colors he uses