Kinder Comet (New OC)

[Everfree 286]

So here's a new OC idea I came up with. Her name is Kinder Comet. Her story is that she was once an apprentice of Celestia and also had the potential to become a princess. That's the reason she has the same cutie mark as Twilight, since her talent was related to the element of friendship. However, upon facing one of Celestia's trials, she failed and let her desires overcome her and she became corrupted. Her cutie mark now resembles all that is left of her mind, which is only selfish desires.

(before corruption)


(after corruption)

Edited January 16, 2015 by Everfree

[~*bacon princess*~ 278]

The story is 2edgy and the character design is Mary Sue-ish. I don't like it.

[Everfree 286]

The story is 2edgy and the character design is Mary Sue-ish. I don't like it.

I wouldn't say the design is Mary Sue-ish. It actually has a lot of meaning behind it. The reason she is covered in rainbow is because the vast array of colors is symbolic of her expressed desires and impulses which she has no control of. It also symbolizes her comfort. Rainbows and stars give this character a high sense of comfort and security, which is also why stars are all over her mane. She never wants to do anything that is out of her comfort zone. That's also why her eyes have rainbow stars in them; she refuses to acknowledge anything that gives her discomfort. All she wants is her own comfort and her desires to be fullfilled. This blinds her from the rest of the world and only alows her to see her own little world inside her head. Her cutie mark also represents how her comfort and desires has blinded her.

 

Besides, I'm never going to RP w/ this character. I don't RP in the first place