Want some feedback- attempt at some Orchestra

[Marathon 562]

Hey guys, as the title says I'm looking for positive feedback on a small segment I wrote for my OC Lila (thought it would suit her character at bit). Anyway, thanks for any and all feedback 

Link to the song here: https://pony.fm/tracks/2056-lilas-orchestra

Just press the play button~

[ztrash 62]

I think you can add some more to this, maybe a brass section. Other than that, I'd say you're doing a good job. But there's always room for improvement.

Edited April 16, 2014 by Zizkil

[Marathon 562]

I think you can add some more to this, maybe a brass section. Other than that, I'd say you're doing a good job. But there's always room for improvement.

Thank you both commenting, really appreciate it! Though I'd tried adding some to this, the basic "brass" sound that FL studio has sounds very synth-y and not like a real brass instrument so I cut it.

[ztrash 62]

Thank you both commenting, really appreciate it! Though I'd tried adding some to this, the basic "brass" sound that FL studio has sounds very synth-y and not like a real brass instrument so I cut it.

Do you have Harmor or Harmless? Because those usually can do pretty well on sounding like brass, but still it is hard to make it sound realistic.

[Marathon 562]

Do you have Harmor or Harmless? Because those usually can do pretty well on sounding like brass, but still it is hard to make it sound realistic.

I do, but if I'm going to have brass sounds I want the to sound and feel real. Those don't really cut close to what I'm looking for. But I am planning on buying the FL orchestral pack either way.