story dea, would love feedback

[ggg-2 3,553]

okay, story idea based on the new (very spoilery) trailer for the ne Equestria Games episode. I'd like feedback, please. Rainbow Dash and Spitfire are very close friends but when Spitfire very narrowly but noticeably beats her best friend in the Equestria Games relay race, the two very competitive mares have a falling out. Can Soarin help fix their fractured friendship before it's completely destroyed beyond repair? so.....good idea? bad idea? should I go ahead with this one?

Edited April 29, 2014 by ggg-2

[Scootalove 10,689]

If you're going to make that into a fan fiction, I say go for it.

[ggg-2 3,553]

@Scootalove does that mean you like the idea?

[Scootalove 10,689]

@Scootalove does that mean you like the idea?

Yes, I do like the idea. Quickly, make the idea into a fan fiction!

[ggg-2 3,553]

well I don't...really actually have any ideas beyond that ^^; if you're willing to bat around ideas, you're more than welcome.

[Scootalove 10,689]

well I don't...really actually have any ideas beyond that ^^; if you're willing to bat around ideas, you're more than welcome.

But that idea is good enough. Have those two face off against each other in a race, where they still have some issues to work out after Rainbow Falls.

[ggg-2 3,553]

i'm not sure how soarin will fit into it as far as why he's so tartarusbent on helping them reconcile

[Scootalove 10,689]

i'm not sure how soarin will fit into it as far as why he's so tartarusbent on helping them reconcile

Well, have Soarin try to have them get along. Have him talk to them separately.

[ggg-2 3,553]

I have another idea, where the mane 6 are going to the crystal empire for a vacation and big mac asks to go too, saying he wants to fulfill his papa's final wish which was for big mac to see the crystal empire with his own eyes. while there, he meets shining armor and begins a friendship with him based on their love for their sisters. does that one sound good?