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1v1 With Mr. Critical


Delernil

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The Changeling made her way down into Baltimare. It was a large city, so she was expecting to run into at least one other Changeling. She was cautious with that. Many of her species seemed to be upset that she left the hive to search Equestria. At the same time, she might meet somebody with similar goals. As she walked, a piece of paper caught her eye.


 


Flying over quickly, she grabbed it and unfurled it. It seemed to be...a map? Not a full map, but more of a part. But where would it have come from? She began to follow it to the first mark, a small town outside of Baltimare. Hopefully she would find the next part of the map, and maybe somepony to travel with.


 


 


 


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Traveller stared at the ripped, crumpled paper. He slid it into his notebook earlier, and finally had the time to look it over. But it made no sense...it was a map of Equestria of course. He had seen the map and had memorized it. But it had random marking all over it, and he had never seen them before. They looked to be just scribbles and drawings with no real importance, but who would do that? Sighing and sandwiching it into his notebook, he took it to where he knew he could get some answers, Manehattan. His friends in Manehattan always knew what he didnt.


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I only love you platonically.

As in plate tectonics.

As in two bodies sliding against each other.

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-Makusu

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Critical was on his way out from Baltimare. Returning to his home in Ponyville. IT had been a long day today, being dragged halfway across Equestria for a film that was not even worth the effort and his time. While he was in thought, a slip of paper smacked him in the face. Blinding him. He took it off and found that it was a map to something. With nothing to do, he thought he could use a nice distraction.

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On her way into baltimare, Clear Night was excited to be the first civilian to use the worlds largest telescope. She felt she had the right location. But she felt that it was off. She was in a small town outside of Baltimare when she was expecting to be inside it. While she looked around, a newspaper struck her in the face. Removing it, she found it to be a piece of a map. And by the looks of it, she was near where the X marked. So, for curiosities sake, she followed.

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