Cassafrass 249 May 17, 2014 Share May 17, 2014 I really need some help with my griffon OC if anyone would take the time to check her out and give me some advice... I really hope the Zecora part isn't Mary Sueish, but I tried hard to not make it be. Thanks everypony! Here's the link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/featherweight-r6447 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forlong 1,726 May 19, 2014 Share May 19, 2014 The only problems I detect are in how you describe her. The description is incredibly redundant and should elaborate a bit more on her flaws. However, looking past the writing flaws in your summary, you have a good character baseline here. Connecting her with Zecora isn't a problem. Check out my YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5qXAcUzrizEHvorGalU5jg?feature=watch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cassafrass 249 May 28, 2014 Author Share May 28, 2014 Wow, really? Thanks so much! I will try to work on her description when I have time, but other then that, thanks for being the only one to reply to my topic. It means a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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