video Garry's Mod Machinima: Heavy Buys a $400K Sandvich

[Ponies N' Stuff 12]

my first gmod machinima! Enjoy

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fukokidSK5Q

Edited May 30, 2014 by Ponies N' Stuff

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Well, I don't know how to say this without discouraging you, but I thought the editing was kind of slow, and the music was unfitting.

 

Don't get me wrong, I'm sure you'll improve. After all, it is your first machinima.

[BayoUni2847 528]

Not bad, not bad at all, especially for your first one.

 

I recommend checking out a couple of animating tools that can be found in G-Mod's workshop. They're very helpful to get very smooth stop motion by having a user friendly interface and onion skinning your previous poses, which is insanely helpful.

 

Also try adding some more sound effects to the video, I liked how you had the ding when the sandwich appeared, so when you start having characters snap to certain poses or when an awkward moment arises, add a sound effect, it gives the scene a little more life.

 

Like SpaceOnion stated, editing should be faster, so things don't seem to drag a little too long on certain scenes.

 

I understand trying to get the perfect song for your work can sometimes be difficult, especially when you have a bunch of them in your head and trying to pick the best one can be a challenge.

 

I'm WAY more experienced with Source Filmmaker compared to Garry's Mod, but I definitely know my way around animating in G-Mod.

 

I hope my advice is helpful to you and you keep at it, I can't wait to see what you make in the future

[Skeleton Kin 385]

I suggest putting more frames into your Machinimas as it will improve it a nice bit.

Edited June 8, 2014 by Clinkz Eastwood