This is my first "serious" drawing that was not based on a vector or anything. Rough, nothing but pencil. If you have any advice or notice anything off, don't hesitate to let me know. I know Fluttershy doesn't look properly lit, but I didn't want to try and redraw her face for the billionth time, her and Angel bunny were actually the hardest part of this drawing.

I actually started out happy with it, then as it progressed, I got more and more dissatisfied with it. I don't know, just feels a bit "childish." Maybe it's the trees. Well, it is what it is. I guess.

I don't know what I'm doing, pls help.