00:17 needs some choir "ahhhh's" for something good.
00:27 an into fill to the drums with choir again

00:56 great bassline

00:58 I don't know what male voice that is but it messes with me

01:09 yeah please get rid of that male vocal sample it's killing me

01:30 interesting spacial change

01:40 oh man that male vocal KILLS the nice spacial ambience

02:08 good ending

I'm sorry for being or sounding critical and that seriously isn't my intention I just want to make you a musician by taking some good ideas i had that would make it more beautiful. Which I beleive with my soul that is what you're aiming for.

00:17 needs some choir "ahhhh's" for something good.

00:27 an into fill to the drums with choir again

00:56 great bassline

00:58 I don't know what male voice that is but it messes with me

01:09 yeah please get rid of that male vocal sample it's killing me

01:30 interesting spacial change

01:40 oh man that male vocal KILLS the nice spacial ambience

02:08 good ending

 

I'm sorry for being or sounding critical and that seriously isn't my intention I just want to make you a musician by taking some good ideas i had that would make it more beautiful. Which I beleive with my soul that is what you're aiming for.

Hey, thank you very much for the advice! Anything to sound better!